|Reviews for Abandoned Every Mile|
| AtemYamiYugi chapter 4 . 11/28/2013
love this chppie
| Guest chapter 23 . 11/17/2013
how sweet and I feel so sorry for yugi
| AnimeHannah chapter 14 . 7/6/2013
You goofed, the cop wasnt supposed to know Yugi's name.
| Deadly Shadow chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Misty "Yugi! *Hugs* You poor boy!"
Kira "*Tilts her head* Why is Misty hugging him?.."
Misty " because!"
Kira "Anyway, good story."
| feamlenaruto chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
sad but sweet story
| Sentinel Prime chapter 32 . 7/22/2012
Oh my Ra, if your Yugi was any cuter, he'd be a chibi. This is a definite fave.
| FoxFlyer chapter 10 . 10/17/2011
More generic complaining about Grammar, lack of pronouns, and altogether choppiness. - yes, that is a word.
I'm still in it for the plot, but the rest of these issues makes it not-quite-a-winner, savvy?
| FoxFlyer chapter 9 . 10/17/2011
Choppy and name repetitive, grammar complaints, same old...
I am really digging the story though, Yuugi is almost unbearably cute!
| FoxFlyer chapter 8 . 10/17/2011
Pronouns. You should use more pronouns. It sounds horribly repetitive to say Yami Yami Yami over and over again. Awww, Yuugi's afraid of thunder!
'GENERIC GRAMMAR COMPLAINT' and stuff.
| FoxFlyer chapter 7 . 10/17/2011
Ok, I have two issues with this chapter.
I understand that Yuugi needs help doing everything cause he's a precious little lamb, but it's really choppy.
Grammar, grammar, blah, blah, blah.
And who only spends a few minutes at the park? Got to be there for half an hour at least.
| FoxFlyer chapter 6 . 10/17/2011
G-r-a-m-m-e-r. This would be so great if you just read through it before you posted it and looked for errors.
Not that it isn't great. It's freaking heart-wrenching.
I love it.
| FoxFlyer chapter 5 . 10/17/2011
Ka-wai-iiiiiii! So cute, so cute! Grammar grammar, blah, blah, blah. I'm going to mention it every review because it's a killer. But OMG so cute
| FoxFlyer chapter 4 . 10/17/2011
I now want to edit the crap out of this. You're working with an amazing plot but the grammar makes it... less than fun to read.
| FoxFlyer chapter 3 . 10/17/2011
GRAMMAR! *cries hopelessly*
Vixie: Tell her what's wrong.
You're ruining what is a beautiful story with all this crappy Grammar.
Vixie: Good. Onward?
I don't know how much more I can stand... but I love the plot.
| FoxFlyer chapter 2 . 10/17/2011
My first complaint? This grammar is SHIT!
Vixie: Bitch. Excuse her, she's a grammar Nazi and she is now going to take it upon herself to edit this.
Well the story is excellent, but it is ruined by shitty grammar.
Vixie: I repeat, you are a bitch.