Reviews for The Price of Fame |
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![]() ![]() fr a bruh moment |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch. Pride bites you again, Asuka. You paid the price for 'happiness'. You should have read the fine print. Excellent as always, Herr Wolk. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nicely done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() YOU FREAKIN BASTARD ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() These fics s/5528503/1/NGE_Walking_in_the_Shadow_of_Dreams and s/6018100/1/NGE_Walking_in_the_Shadow_of_Dreams_Ve r_2 expand this into a longer story, though Asuka has a different job and [Spoiler] [Spoiler], and Takuro has a different name. |
![]() ![]() These fics s/5528503/1/NGE_Walking_in_the_Shadow_of_Dreams and s/6018100/1/NGE_Walking_in_the_Shadow_of_Dreams_Ve r_2 Expand this into a full fic (though Asuka's job is changed, Takuro has a different name, and [Spoiler] [Spoiler] [Spoiler] [Spoiler]. The second is aiming to be a longer and/or better version of the first, which is more or less done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() GAH! you are an excellent writer, but damn. That was cold. I am almost inclined to ignore your "no death threats" request at the end. Still excellent as usual... Need...happiness...refill... |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw! so sad! But a beautifully written piece. |
![]() ![]() Poor Asuka. T_T A Twisted Happy Ending. :D |
![]() ![]() I liked this a lot. considering the publicity of the Angels, Asuka would eventually be called to do a movie about NERV and the Angels, right? Maybe you can use that as a sequel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed that story, thank you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was a real good story, I liked it alot. It had some real good emotions that were expressed in it. Even though it is a one shot, I would encourage you to add at least a couple more chapters to it and have them end up together. That would tie it up very nicely |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a sweet one-shot, but I wouldn't mind seeing it become a novel-type, if you know what I mean... chapters and all |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was...in a word beautiful. A perfect depiction of an idea of how their lives would change if third impact did not occur. I will agree that it is a sad ending but as in time I have begun to understand the Japanese philosophy it is in fact not and ending but rather a begining. I look forwards to reading more of your other works, happy endings or not. Good luck & best wishes, Hououza |
![]() ![]() ![]() One yes it's been done but I like this, seems that this continues the sort in missed communcation they had when they were together...which begs the question, would each try one more time to take that extra steps? Maybe a sequel of sorts might be asked for. But knowing the writer they'd be around 80 and hard of hearing. ;-) But seriously I think Misato could be a great catalyst her maybe having a normal conversation mentioning Touji's and Hikair's sone Takuro! Hope that's enough of a hint! dennisud |