|Reviews for Catacombs|
| trev chapter 18 . 7/26/2005
damn u why didn't u tell me you had talent? you said u wrote porn! not talented porn!
| trev chapter 17 . 7/26/2005
if you DARE let him die i will hunt you down with all my squirelly wrath!
| trev chapter 14 . 7/26/2005
yayayayayay! yoh found them hhehehehehe. i hope he kills the evil raping bastard. good going vicky!xx
(again - if ure not vicky pleez ignore)
| trev chapter 13 . 7/26/2005
what is WITH all these ppl forgiving their rapists?
| trev chapter 12 . 7/26/2005
'You’re thirteen, Yoh. I’m six hundred and twenty four. There’s over five hundred years’ difference.' really? not maybe 6 hundred perhaps? chuh - the terrible maths skills lmao...
and why is yoh engaged at 13? what kind of sick place is Yu-Gi-Oh?
| trevor chapter 11 . 7/26/2005
its so very odd to think u wrote this. r u one of these ppl who really counts reviews? bcus u know me i talk (or write) a lot...i'm more than happy to review every chapter if u wish :-D but i find that can b annoying... :-(
| Tiendron chapter 18 . 6/7/2005
You HAVE to continue this fic! How can you torture us like this? Please write more! Please! I like your style of writing and the way you thought of bringing Amidamaru back to life.
P.S. Just a request, please could you give me some links to any other Amidamaru/Yoh fanfiction, it's really hard to find any...
| I would sign in but I'm just too lazy chapter 7 . 3/19/2005
Um, just so you know:
Amidamaru is very OOC, even before all the stuff that can't possibly happen to a ghost. Just thought you'd like to know that. Also, Amidamaru calls Yoh "Lord Yoh". Why, I don't know, but he does. Otherwise, I like this a lot, it's very original with the whole 'turn Amidamaru human again' thing. On the whole a very good job!
| Goliath Family Witch chapter 10 . 3/19/2005
I LOVE YOU! o_O
| limpet666 chapter 18 . 2/28/2005
*blinks* so...it's like...over? *tilts head*
NOO! TOO SUDDEN! DONT END IT LIKE THAT!
Shouldn't like...Yoh be dying tho? He was like stabbed... oO *shrugs*
A good ending idea but you did it kinda quick *nods*
| limpet666 chapter 1 . 10/10/2004
WRITE MORE! DAMN YOU WRITE MORE NOW! GET A MUSE OR CATCH SOME PLOT BUNNIES BUT WRITE MORE NOW!
Not that I'm complaining that you're writing your YuGiOh fanfic... but you have SO! got to write more of this! YOH IS DYING THERE AND YOU HAVE JUST LEFT HIM AND AMIDAMARU! Do you even know what happens when you leave characters dying... the turn against you, yes they do... Aragorn did it to me... *rubs at bruise on arm* damn ranger...
So write more now, I will bug you on msn, I swear it! *plots to bug* Iw oudl threaten you with no Rping...but that'd be too mean...and besides it would hurt me to damn much... ;_;
PLEASE WRITE MORE! I'll get you a muse if you want! You can borrow my Ren muse!
| TT83725219 chapter 17 . 9/25/2004
I once had forgotten to review late, but this is VERY late. xD Sorry! -;;
But... *points* It's the vampire! x_x He's still there! Ah! ;_; Can't you... kill him because he scares your reviewers? And did Yoh just die? x_x
*sobs* I need to know how this ends~...
| limpet666 chapter 17 . 9/5/2004
Oh no! No no no! It's a nice part and then that damned vampire shows up and hurts everone! Damn damn damn that vampire! *grabs stake and goes off searching for vampire*
Oh...when I find him I will fong him so hard his insides will be out, his outside will be in, his internal organs will become his external organs, his...Pain...lots of Pain...
mutter damned knights tale mutter
| bffimagine chapter 17 . 9/5/2004
O. I thought the end was that last chapter. Maybe it'll be about say... thirty chapters long?
| TT83725219 chapter 16 . 9/1/2004
Sorry for reviewing so late. ;; I opened the email a few days ago and thought 'I'll review later.', but then I forgot to review at all. xD
The vampire is dead now, right? Wait, let me rephrase that; The vampire dude is gone now, right? Because... Every time I read about him, I have to sleep with the lights on... .