Reviews for Pretty
Geek Squared 1307 chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
Short but sweet.

G.S.1307
BrattyPrincessnirrti chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
Very good, i think you should continute.
BooRose chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
hm...one thing 'Neelix' is spelt wid an 'N' and a 'K'
GrimSage chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
Well now, you've certainly captured the innocence of the moment. Naomi happy and content, soon to be changed forever by circumstances beyond her control. A true example of the harsh reality of life.

Quite beautiful in it's own unique way, isn't it?
HUH chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
so confused
naomi chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
oh please finish, and make longer chapters!