Reviews for The Shell
DanaryesIsGoingToBreakTheWheel chapter 1 . 10/19/2008
A great story. Very good.
Magnus The Wolf chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
cool
Insane Vampiress chapter 1 . 8/18/2004
Fred as she was becoming Illyria, awesome! I can actually kind of imagine Fred/Illyria saying the last line...maybe that's just me though.
GrimSage chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
A truly poetic insight into the last moments of Winifred Burkle. You've captured her pain, desperation, and regret perfectly in this fic.

My only problem is with the phrasing of the last line. It doesn't clearly articulate if those are Fred's final thoughts, or Illyria's first ones. (Or perhaps I'm just reading it wrong.) Maybe it's a combination of both?
HUH chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
again, so confused. Your really deep man.
lightning bug chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
I'm not sure what I think about this. You have a really good style of writing, but this was...I dunno. Something didn't sit right with me. Maybe cause it was too short.