Reviews for Cub Of Scar's
KittyKraz13 chapter 8 . 3/30/2008
Aw...I love Simba...he can't die! And Ashiki sounded so cute...so sad. I like it though. :) :(

-Trinity
KittyKraz13 chapter 6 . 3/30/2008
Not brother you silly goose. Nephew...Simba is scars nephew. :D LOL!

-Trinity
danielle134 chapter 10 . 3/14/2008
I absolutely love this story and the story that its the sequel to. And I was wondering if you could review my story? Because I'm not sure if I'm doing a good job so far. Thanks
Katera chapter 10 . 11/24/2004
Great story!
Katera chapter 9 . 11/24/2004
NALA CAN'T MARRY HIM!
snowsparrow chapter 10 . 9/27/2004
I read this. To be honest, it wasn't one of my favourite stories. But I really like the way you write and I hope you write some more stories.

Sarabi
Bribles chapter 10 . 9/27/2004
CAN YOU CONTINUE FASTAER!

LOL!
Doppleganger33 chapter 10 . 9/26/2004
Oh...well at least she stayed faithful to Simba.

You've peaked my interest. What did this person say that was so bad? Oh wait...I'll read it.
The Silent Reaper chapter 10 . 9/26/2004
*weeps* Thank you thank you! I'm really proud of my oven mitt but I won't be here at all if it wasn't for... the authoress! Everlasting-oranges!

*audience claps and cheers, along with a few hoots* Yes yes, I thought it was a brave speech she wrote. She's the authoress, so let her do her own thing!

Really if someone did that to me I would say: Fine, don't read my story, no one's forcing you to.

Of course it's been quite a while since I've written a new story...

Now as for YOUR story: I liked the ending, it was less quick than the other Lion King story you did. For a second there I actually thought Nala and Hima would get together. Good thing I was wrong! (Sorry I'm those you-should-only-have-one-love-of-your-life type of people)

Now for a few questions from persistent me: What happend to Nuka? Hmm? And who is Hima really? How did they know each other? Is it the same plot from your other story where Nala runs off with a rogue lion?

I was a bit surprised that Kovu wasn't betrothed to Kiara. Very interesting, I loved the ending!

Oh yes, the oven mitt was delightful too.
SunRise19 chapter 10 . 9/26/2004
I loved this story, hope to see more from you, and I love while Simba was away!
everlasting-oranges chapter 9 . 9/19/2004
This is the first time I have ever put a review in my own story, but I feel I must publicaly reply to that review, and also this same reply will be put in the next chapter of "Cub Of Scar's"...

Hm, you would think if you had read ALL of my stories, you would have read the author note which stated I DON'T CARE IF I LOSE REVIEWERS JUST BECAUSE I KILLED OFF THEIR FAVORITE CHARACTER/A CHARACTER THEY LIKED. Don't try to do me a favor by saying "I'll still keep your story on my favs because SIMBA DIDN'T DIE IN IT!" because if you are this negative and close-minded I don't want to be named! I am really appalled by your attitude. I have been badgered about almost killing Nala once and people saying "If you kill Nala, I won't read anymore!" as a threat, and I just laugh. I write partly for the reviews, but mostly because it is fun, and I like to express my creativity. If you truly were a fan, you would have just A. Discontinued reading this story but reading my others or B. Just shrugging of the fact that he died because HE'S A CARTOON CHARACTER! I do thank you for the nice reviews so far, excluding the one copied above, but I simply don't need this, and I would be glad if you chose to not review anymore then submitting, for lack of a better word, crap reviews, and no you cannot call me a quote "evil tyrant son of a loser", because calling me names isn't going to make me rewrite the story or even change my writting habits. Thanks for your time,

Alyssa
Mario Tobler chapter 9 . 9/19/2004
Can I say that your an evil tyrant son of a loser? You Shouldn't have killed Simba, it makes me mad. you even ruined the popular "I didn't die you just buried me alive and I dug myself out, but was too weak to get back to pride rock, and some lionesses(or lions) found me and nursed me back to health and now I'm strong enough to come back" line that could still possibaly be used if you wanted the fans approval to come up. I was gonna quit reading altogether after Simba died, but I thought you were gonna do it and I even had you on favorites which you will be taken off of. You shouldn't have killed Simba or this story would have been great. sorry for losing a big fan. Oh, but I'll still keep your stories on favs because THEY DIDN'T HAVE SIMBA DIE IN IT!
Crimson Wolf 1304 chapter 9 . 9/15/2004
I love this. You have to carry on because this is the best story i have read since i've logged in.
Crimson Wolf 1304 chapter 1 . 9/13/2004
Keep it up because its really good
Doppleganger33 chapter 9 . 9/12/2004
As I said before I'll say it again. are b#$% * for removing a perfectly harmless story.

Was it porn? No. Was it explicitly graphic? No. It was just a fic about a game show and the Lion King. Come on!

Oh and about the story. Good that you fixed everything with Kovu. I liked the inclusion of a real life concept. The hinting that Hima and Nala could hook up and form a mixed family (Is that the correct term.) The son "Kosa" hm foreshadowing of what Nala's going to do.

Though it does seem a bit early for Nala to get with Hima after Simba's death. I don't really mind. Let's face it. Simba was sort of wimp in your storyline. So he never really got any sympathy from me. So go for it Nala!
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