|Reviews for The Day it Changed|
| studyofchaos chapter 23 . 1/25
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| Daki92 chapter 23 . 8/29/2011
Great story, i fucking love the fact Ron didn't just forgive her after all that shit... Most stories show him as a human door mat 100% I'm glad to see a story where he can grow past that finally
| nekoken chapter 23 . 8/30/2010
Great story though the ending was a bit abrupt and rushed. you should have probably up played a few aspects that happened but let them die out. Like Kim sleeping with Josh and Ron having to explain his rapid change in appearance. Also you could have had Ron state more clearly that he was with Bonnie at the end and that their relationship would likely only stay as friends if that was what you were going for. I also think Kim and Ron's reconciliation was a bit rushed as well and seemed forced. It might have been nice to go into Ron's perspective and give a reason why he listened to her maybe thinking about her family and old times and such. Or anything really, I just felt a bit unfulfilled about how they became friends again lol. well loved the story and am going to read the sequel hoped my suggestions help you in either this story or future ones.
| nekoken chapter 15 . 8/30/2010
Great chapter I really loved the perspective from Bonnie's mom, though I think there conversation could have been a bit better. didn't really seem to flow with the characters to well. but It wasn't bad by any means.
| nekoken chapter 9 . 8/29/2010
Hey great story so far, don't know what the hell your talking about not being a good writer though. you did a great job with the different perspectives and made it believable how you broke them up. though it would have been nice if you did a bit more from Kim's perspective with Josh and him comforting her and how she sort of got back together with him after everything he did. maybe even get some perspective from Shego or Drakken somewhere in the story like when he first joined them or something maybe get Shego to have a small thing for him or something. even if it doesn't go anywhere. well just wanted to say that and ill get back to chapter 12
| snowman794 chapter 23 . 9/22/2008
amazing story, it feels kinda like spider-man with Ron's newly developed sense as well as strength
| Pojko chapter 23 . 8/16/2008
| ryan chapter 23 . 9/25/2007
second Kim Possible fic that i've actually sat through and read from start to finish. i was fortunate enough to have no work/school today so i got to read straight through and continue and a bit into the sequel. possibly a ron/kin/bonnie relationship? hehe
| ryan chapter 7 . 9/25/2007
wow. wasn't expecting that. maybe darkRon...hehe
| fatherfigure1 chapter 23 . 5/13/2007
Sitting here with tears in my eyes. I remember her well, been there done that. Thanks for a great story.
| Conker4 chapter 23 . 9/26/2006
I really enjoyed the interaction between Ron and Bonnie in this story, but I thought it had a few flaws, IMHO. Firstly, while the idea of Kim putting Josh before Ron is a good one, having Kim just entirely forget about Ron several times seemed a bit implausible. Similarly implausible was Bonnie's radical change from bitchy antagonist of the series to becoming pretty much perfect after one phonecall from Ron. Perhaps a few more problems in the R/B relationship would have added some depth.
The only other thing I found a bad development was Ron's choice to go back to Drakken and Shego to get his 'upgrade'. He already knows that there's a good chance it could kill him, yet despite his blossoming relationship with Bonnie, he risks it with barely any consideration. And not only the risk, but it gives the impression that Ron needs improvement to be the hero of a story. I always thought part of his charm was that he was making the effort to help Kim despite not having the super powers or training or anything. 'Magically buff Ron beats up Brick and wins the hot girl' is cliché. Super-Soldier Ron just... isn't Ron. But that's only my opinon.
Overall, one of the better stories I've read.
| US.Steele chapter 4 . 3/27/2006
Mankey! Hangings too good for him. BURNING'S too good for him! He should be torn into little bitty pieces, and BURIED ALIVE...
| Jac chapter 23 . 3/25/2006
This fanfiction has touched me in many ways. It's worth staying up late. :) PERFECT JOB. :D
| Lighthawk610 chapter 1 . 3/22/2006
This story was well done but I have some question, I know smart people will already figure it out but, one did kim realy have sex with josh and why did the ending seem so rushed?
| conan98002 chapter 23 . 3/22/2006
I thought I reviewed this already but it let me review so I guess I didnt this isnt a half bad little fic