Reviews for A Secret Kept Too Long
ViChaseGranger chapter 1 . 9/19/2013
you can't leave it lie that..noooo no jo no no no no NOOOO...!
Isabellamariesummer chapter 1 . 4/9/2011
please write more
AdmiralJackal chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Awesome story.

zafaran chapter 1 . 4/12/2006
I'd like it a lot better if you'd finish it, please. You've being very cruel by just teasing us with this opening chapter and then abandoning the story for going on two years now. I hope your schedule and muse will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran
Gucia chapter 1 . 3/7/2006
I'm being hopeful and optimistic and I'm adding this story to my author alert list. Please don't disappoint me! ;) I love stories that have Severus as Dumbledore's son and the beginning was promising ;) I'm sure your story would be a wonderful read, especially after HBP ;)
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 1 . 9/29/2005
HOLY #$%!

That was heart breaking! I loved it!



Millennium Priestess chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
I SO love this fic already. Why haven't you updated it? It is such a brilliant start to a fic. I love all story with Severus as Dumbledore's son. I'm dieing to find out what's going to happen next. What's Severus Dumbledore going to look like? And how is he going to react to Albus the next time he sees his 'father'? This is too good to drop. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! MP
HJW chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
You must finish!
growingshade chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
please write more please,please, please
Alia D chapter 1 . 10/3/2004
I know I should have reviewed for a while now but I'm doing it now and that's all that matters. Can you please write more! It's not fair! I need to see what happens to Sev and Albus

NativeMoon chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
O dang! Now talk about original! You must go on! I want to know what happens - dont leave me hanging LOL

I am still a sucker for Severus - even if he is Severus Dumbledore - (shaking) - Lord - Snape suits better LOL!
S.K.D chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
I like it very much. I hope you will update soon. I would be happy.
Obsidian Blade chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
Interesting idea... I haven't read enough Harry Potter fics to know whether it's original or not but this fic looks damn original. You're carrying the plot well too, not slowing down too much over any useless detail. I don't think its such a good idea to POV hop so much though, it kinda breaks the flow. :/ Maybe swapping POV between chapters rather than in them...?
kerplank chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
whoah, what the heck? i liked it, but who did kat potter turn into. that means harry has another relative, but doesnt that make sev older thhan the 30, 40 some he is supposed to be? he would have to be like 80 some.
SilverPoint chapter 1 . 7/1/2004
mh... intresing me tinks