Reviews for The Mistake
BookDragon1322 chapter 10 . 2/15
Can you put a message up if this story gets 'adopted' please?
Inuyashawn33087 chapter 10 . 1/14
I'm going to hazard a guess that Nurse White becomes the new Muggle Studies teacher and marries Snape, so they can both look after "James" and maybe add another family member?
lesa.blazer chapter 10 . 7/13/2016
Please continue
Corala chapter 10 . 2/6/2016
So what he up too then hope to see more to this soon
Noxaura Cille chapter 2 . 2/5/2016
...*bursts out laughing at Severus' description* I'm not racist, I swear! ~Nox
rose372938 chapter 7 . 11/1/2015
omg omg im crying poor harry nooo stop i cant *burstes into tears*
missmoonprincess123 chapter 1 . 7/6/2015
I hope u up date soon
winona.murray.7 chapter 10 . 3/29/2015
How can you give this story up after a cliffhanger like that
FwooshEye chapter 10 . 3/1/2015
I would've loved to adopt this, but I'm afraid I wouldn't have time to write on it, I don't even have time to write on my own stuff... :/ But I really do hope you find someone who can adopt it. *Puts it on follow just in case*
Pat chapter 10 . 1/10/2015
Please continue this story, it's brilliant, what will happen between Severus and Rebecca, what is Dumbledore up to, and will Harry ever talk?
Fan963 chapter 10 . 11/22/2014
please continue i loved it and can't wait for more
Venipa chapter 10 . 9/18/2014
so beautifully written and i love how snape found his way and a new love interest lol ms. White will make a good wife n new mother for harry.
Gracealma chapter 11 . 9/16/2014
I enjoyed your story. I like to read stories that have happy ending with Severus Snape adopting Harry.
cullengal101 chapter 10 . 9/5/2014
I like this story so far
hwyla chapter 10 . 9/5/2014
I realize you have decided to not continue this (which I think is a shame since it has started so well), but I did want to comment on a 'continuity' mistake as it should be fixed by whomever you decide to have finish this.

You note in this chapter that Sev wants to have Poppy check Harry to fix his deafness, however in earlier chapters you have Harry able to HEAR perfectly well - he just cannot talk. Therefore I assume you really meant mute not deaf.

I do hope you are able to find someone to continue the fic. I've put a 'follow' on the story and hopefully if you do find someone they can let me know.
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