Reviews for Entropy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Em Gee! I love it , and you must must Write new FICS ONE DAY! I adore your work |
![]() ![]() Fantastic story! You had me laughing out loud quite a few times, which doesn't happen often. Any chance for a sequel? Keep on writing, you're awesome! |
![]() ![]() great story, i loved it ) |
![]() ![]() that was really awesum write sumthing else soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() luv it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You got down their personalites /perfectly/. I adore it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lives up to expectations determined from past stories. Supernatural? Grey's Anatomy? I'm gonna miss the Harry Potter fics _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hermione... tried... Quidditch! lol! That's too funny. I liked the ending. I might take out the monologue and just stick to regular first person POV. This is going into my C2. Aren't you happy? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hee hee hee. I like this. It's very well written with hardly any grammatical errors. :) I'm guessing this is pre-HBP? And the sixth years could come to the ceremony as dates? |
![]() ![]() ![]() "I nearly lost my balance and fell down on my arse. 'Do not follow me.' " - i found that quite amusing. i suppose he noticed she was quite drunk and took hold of that opportunity to have a nice little chat and a walk with her. and yes, i still find that amusing. "My brain had been paralyzed by images of a snogging Harry and Malfoy." you know, by your way of writing, and the number of periods you have, i think you are quite a witty writer. "...and how the thing that scared me the most was the fact that I wasn’t really scared at all." twisted logic, but i can understand. “I need to ask you something...” i can't believe she just asked him that! quotes from your lovely story - all in all, a funny, witty, short little romance. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() pansy - valedictorian? hermione - professional quidditch player? goyle and ginny? where is the world coming to? anyways - interesting so far - in a weird, funny way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was one of the best, love it! amazng! wish everyone could write Draco like you |
![]() ![]() ![]() i luv it! i was kinda worried at the beginning - goyle and ginny? yikes! but the second chapter was totally awesome! super job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL! That was one humorous story. Loved it! _ Sarah |