Reviews for Entropy |
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Lrnd chapter 2 . 5/6/2005 aww cuteness |
Krissy Muffinhead chapter 2 . 5/4/2005 Loved it! Your characterization of Malfoy was spot on. Cheerio! |
Marti Is So Cool chapter 2 . 4/26/2005 How awesome was this story? Witty, funny, cute, well-written...the list goes on. Really good job on this. ) |
Hafthand chapter 2 . 1/16/2005 simply brilliant. Amusing and touching. Well written! I really like it! :) Love, Ally |
bk11 chapter 1 . 9/4/2004 Well, I *could* think of fancy words to describe this here story. "Extended Soliloquy" comes to mind, but seriously, the only thing I'm really excited about is the fact that this first person is reaally really good. I not quite sure, I'd have to check, but do you have some love affair with first person? As I was saying, the past tense and POV really worked to this story's advantage, to the point where you know that it being there made the story, and being without it would break the story. And funny. I love the idea of Ginny and Goyle! I love your chapter titles! I love how Hermione was walking around in the Twilight Zone going, "WTF?" |
Angelsparkle006 chapter 2 . 7/12/2004 loved it |
mesmer chapter 2 . 7/11/2004 i couldn't review on live journal, so i thought i'd do it here. you definitely deserved first place for this one. i loved your narrative and your imagination. i thought you handled draco and hermione's conversations superbly. i loved their conversations the most because they are so wonderfully original in a way that they rise above the rest. this piece is outstanding. |
Syaoronsangel too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 7/11/2004 Hey! Congrats on winning first place! I really enjoyed this fic. It's great. I loved the part where you made Draco the next Minister of Magic. It was great how you ended it. "I needed another drink." I loved it. Greg and Ginny...interesting...I guess it clicks when you think about it. I loved Ron, he's so in character, which is a good thing. The part about Harry wanting to snog Draco that was hilarious. Anyway, it's late but keep up the great work! ~Syaoronsangel |
allara serasai chapter 2 . 7/8/2004 love it |
Kate-Raspberry chapter 1 . 7/8/2004 I love your story |
Crilila chapter 2 . 7/3/2004 That was the sweetest, cutest, funniest Hermione/Draco story i have EVER read! Wow! |
aRE-yOu-mY-mOTheR chapter 2 . 7/3/2004 HEY..this was really good! most people's answers to challenges are ridiculously stupid..but this was brilliant! you sound like a wonderful writer! |
toothpicks chapter 2 . 7/3/2004 This was odd in a very hilarious way. Good job, I like the way you write. |
Charolastras chapter 2 . 7/3/2004 Great Story! I loved it! Keep up the Awesome work! |
Raven55 chapter 2 . 7/3/2004 hehe, I liked this. It was funny and sweet at the same time. And I absolutely loved the way you wrote it. As if she's talking to someone. It's fantastic. It must be hard work to remind yourself to write that way all of the time...anyway, very good job done here! -Raven55 |