Wow! I'm impressed. You've got a good style of writing! I totally adore the ending of the story, it's not as fluffy as in most D/H fics. Both Draco and Hermione semm to be quite in character. But of course the fic's way to short. Keep on writing so good! ;)

Wynn, that was perfect.

You managed to pull off the dramatic monologue style brilliantly - which is no mean feat (dramatic monologue can so easily fall into cliché). Well done. You have my respect.