Reviews for Episode III
Aria Breuer chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
This is definitely closely accurate with Episode III in the Star Wars Saga.

I found no grammatical mistakes and the rhyming is good.

Good work.

-Aria Breuer
Serra-Of-Many-Names chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
Overall, good poetry. The first stanza is my favorite, as I think we all have had the experience of walking that "narrow line" between good and evil.

Your rhythm is, however, a bit off. As the overwhelming majority of the lines have 8 syllables, the poem would sound better if they all did. Simply find shorter words or omit some words, and it'll be great.

Your use of contrast between the "old" and "new" Anakin works very well here. Keep working on it, you're off to a very good start.