Reviews for The Right Moves |
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![]() ![]() That was such a joy to read, thank you for bringing their relationship to life! |
![]() ![]() I’m coming back to read this fanfiction that I read 7 years ago, and that was published when I was 5 years old XD ! How truly magnificent ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is 16 years old and still fresh af |
![]() ![]() I LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() That. That whole scene with the "game," Hikaru's surrender and Akira's slow invasion of his defenses and the caressing his face and whispering into his ear and the-everything after that. Yes. That was very good. *stumbles away in happy daze* |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked it, it was really sweet to read, I have never watched the show before but I found the characters interesting so yeah I felt it was well done. |
![]() ![]() Hello, I liked your fic, what a lack of decency and shame, everyone can hear them, too bad you have not finished the lemon, but I do not like Hikaru seme, I like uke, I love to dominate Akira a Hikaru, I love the couple, hopefully you make more fics of them, so still thanks and kisses. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wanna see the lemon scene! Why didn't you have it in here? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! It's just wonderful reading Hikaru no go fanfics while listening to Hng soundtrack. This is really well written. You did a good job writing Hikaru as a believeable male. He's kind of like me in how he's so unsure about his sexual orientation and if he's ok with spending his entire life with Akira. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3 Peace, Love, (0) K.K |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL I died laughing when Akira asked if he could molest Hikaru. xDDD Too funny! :'D |
![]() ![]() ![]() too cool! |
![]() ![]() That was pretty cute 3 Great job on getting in Hikaru's head, you were spot on with the dialogue as well. Thank you for posting! |
![]() ![]() I don't think I've seen Touya portrayed to be cunning on romance as this. Love the character voices. Hehehe! Awesome fic. Very rereadable. |
![]() ![]() ![]() F***ing genius. I seriously think that the Touya in your story should be labeled as "troll." Genius! Ah, and of course he loses the game. But it's a game Hikaru galdly loses! XD Great job! |