Reviews for The Bet: Deflowering of the Flower
The World is a Blanket chapter 7 . 1/4
Hi! I'm finding your story really interesting so far! One thing that does disturb me (and I know this story was written awhile ago and attitudes have thankfully evolved since then) is how lightly the topic of rape is addressed in this chapter. Just because someone does not say 'no', it doesn't mean it isn't rape. if someone is coerced into having sex when he/she doesn't want to, that is still considered rape, regardless of whether the specific words "stop" or "no" are spoken. I realize that Syaoran in your story doesn't mean any real harm, but his attitude towards rape is alarming. I hope you can understand where I'm coming from!
Sophie chapter 2 . 9/14/2016
SEXUAL HARASSMENT!
megzgomezindia chapter 13 . 8/19/2016
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Dy37 chapter 34 . 8/1/2016
Thankyou.
Dy37 chapter 34 . 8/1/2016
This story was absolutely incredible. I have no words to explain how i feel about this story, only that it is one that will always stay in my heart. You have amazing writing skills and i am so grateful that you have written this. You did an incredible job at making the entire story so interesting and i just coyldnt
anime girl chapter 4 . 6/12/2016
it confusing i donnt know if she went home or went to drink and go with syaoran
yourlastjuliet chapter 14 . 4/7/2016
Sorry if I reviewed very late, and reading this very late. Since it was published in 2004, and ended up in year 2012, it's now 2016. I recently just finished watching Cardcaptor Sakura, idk why I did watched it. And I couldn't get over with CCS and TRC feels. I'm craving some of their fan-made mangas or doujinshi and fanfics! w
And I'm thankful I stumbled upon this fanfic of yours! I don't know but I'm too lost for words of what should I say... in a positive way!
CandyCanesLove chapter 34 . 1/5/2016
WRITE A SEQUEL!
Sumire Jane chapter 3 . 10/7/2015
I read it as.. He needed a cold shower with sakura XD
CraftyBebe chapter 34 . 4/6/2015
This is the second time I have read this story. It is absolutely one of my favorite tales of my favorite pairing. You did an amazing job!
sunshineshaa chapter 1 . 4/6/2015
UPDATE PLEASE
PrincessMariakari2 chapter 34 . 2/16/2015
Hello this is my first review ever and I know this might not mean much but I love this Story. I love this syaoran, the development from playboy to finding love bit by bit and the stolen kisses just made me float. This fanfiction is beautiful and I would not change any bit if I were you. Thanks I fell in love with this story
kickbuttowskiyeah chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
The starting plot is exciting, but doesn't sound like sakura and syaoran at all. I'm pointing out as a weakness, although I do understand that their character wouldn't do with this kind of story. But still, I wish you could made a story with them and their character. But I'm not here to give flames, don't worry, I'm not like that. Like every other readers, I'm only here to give suggestions read your writings simply because we love it. Thank you for posting this, have a nice day!
Guest chapter 10 . 12/26/2014
I know this isn't relevant... But my friend once had sprite, bread bun, popping candy, popcorn, and strawberries. And I love your writing.
taemoni chapter 34 . 11/23/2014
This is a good story
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