*When Zim is looking Dib over and taunting him* O.o ... I'm getting flirty/sexual vibes, WHY am I getting flirty/sexual vibes?!

*See-saw scene* NOW I'm getting possessive vibes. *Confused head tilt* Now, I'm just curious about where this goes. :o

*The injuries* *Musing* ... I HOPE Zim gets answers, 'cause *I'M* curious now, too. :/

... Are you doing this on purpose or am I just crazy from reading ZaDr stuff from time to time?! O.o 'Cause I STILL sense flirting ... SADISTIC FLIRTING, but flirting all the same. ... *Musing* OR my poor mind is in the gutter and I'm reading in between the lines wrong. x''''''''D

*Zim discovering that Humanity hides their weaknesses in public* ... Somehow, it doesn't surprise me that Zim is sadistic/enjoys Dib's pain. -_-

*Zim's torture of Dib* ... Good news, the more I read the torture, (I WANNA READ WHAT HAPPENS AT THE END, SUE ME!) despite not liking pain too much, the more the sex/flirting thing fades.

Dib is BRAVE. O.o

*Head tilted* ... Zim, you are one TWISTED character.

This was really good! Very dark and descriptive.

I love this. It's nice and violent. Why aren't there more Invader Zim fan-fics like this?

Cool...

Absolutely love how you play Zim. He's not an innocent, naive, floundering "Invader" like a lot of authors make him. He's quite sadistic and mean spirited and strong. Very nicely written. Gotta admit I cheered when Dib said "I will NEVER surrender." I've liked both of the stories I've read of you thus far, and will definately continue with more. 3

I think it's really good. Let the enemy (Even though i like Zim more than Dib) win for once!

That... was... AMAZING! I loved how Zim finally said 'I win' in the ambulance! Keep The Epicness Up.

Twisted little f-ker in't he.

that was merceles!...I like your style...,it kinda makes my carnivorous side...(licks teeth)...bloodthirsty...! 0_0 OMG! did I say that im sorrey my wolfside got the better of me again_¿ «-(thats a sweat drop)

...Yikes... Your Zim is terrifyingly malevolent... Wonderful villain! I'm a little creeped out, but that's a good thing. I feel so sorry for Dib...

This was painful to read. In the good way, I mean. Every word, description, action... It was all perfectly placed. My heart beat a little bit faster near the end, just -hoping- that it would turn out happy or peaceful. And the fact that it didn't have a "happy" ending makes it all the better.

Thank you for sharing this wonderful, -wonderful- fic. :)

How was he bleeding...?

Whoa...that was really gorey man...but cool at the same time...I kinda feel sorry for Dib...ya no...but its in his nature to not surrender...yea...

Oh, *God*. Zim is... so perceptive, so CRUEL... gah. And it makes sense that while Dib's all loud and spazzy about ALIENS and BIGFOOT and OMGWTFENDOFTHEWORLDYOUIDIOTS, when it comes to something like being *stabbed in the chest*... Man.

I just re-watched some eps last night, so I've got Zim's voice pretty clear in my head and MAN you've got it to a T. *fangirls*

holy shit.

That was freaking awesome. Not a bit of detail spared. And such a sadistically awesome ending!