Reviews for Wounded
Dre chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
Amazing. You seem to have used only the darkness from the Invader Zim series without the goofyness. You are truly a great writer.
Simulacra242 chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
oh your good. your very good... i love your psychoness.
Hoppo chapter 1 . 7/4/2004
Wow, this is creepy...

It's still very well written, however.

Fantastic job!
Senri chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
You've already heard what I have to say on this, but I'll immortalize it here. This story has a lot of power in it, a lot of nausea, I think. Everything in it contributes to that; even the adjectives you use contribute to the air of FILTH it has. Characterization is perfect. Zim is truly cruel here and it FITS. Dialogue is great. I find myself actually starting to hyperventialate with sympathy for Dib as I read. Great work.
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