When will there be a sequel?

I enjoyed this! I'm trying to find a way to put Peter into the mainland in my fic as well, but it's nowhere near the way you did it. I like to see how other people think up those kind of ideas.

Somebody needs to whack Slightly.

You did very well on it, but the ending didn't really seem like an ending.

More, please?

It's very interesting, I wish you would continue it.

It's quite good so far. I like how you put the difficulties Peter had in growing up. Write more soon. :)

Well, I thought this was rather well-written. It's just hard to picture Pan out of NeverLand, but you seemed to have captured the over-all essence. The angst is incredibly captivating.

The only thing about the end that got me was Wendy kissing Peter. Thing is, if he's technically been adopted by the Darlings, wouldn't that be considered incestuous? Nah. Let's not dwell on it.

It seemed to be cut a bit short, but I still liked it very much. We should all maim Slightly for uttering the dreaded faery quote. Shame on him. Kudos to you.

its a good start. i like the whole peter growing up theme, very nice. keep writing! maybe add a lil humor for lil ol me? lol :P

~ashley~