Reviews for Trapped
GoldenTresses91 chapter 3 . 8/10/2009
Woah. Just... woah.

I like that you made her motivation to search Tom out again was her fear of being ignored, forgotten. I think that speaks volumes of why she needed to resort to the Diary in her first year in the first place. It's the primary factor as to why Tom Riddle became Lord Voldemort: he was afraid of being ignored, manipulated, and, in short, forgotten. I can't really articulate how this makes me feel, but just know, your writing is fabulous!

X Ever Yours, Lauren Nicole, authoress
hawaiikel chapter 3 . 1/25/2006
... *speechless*... not because it was bad. in fact it was vair vair good. i just have a couple questions. is ginny's spirit still in tom's diary? that means she cud possess sumone else. of course that means she'll lose part of her soul. n y didnt harry just wait a couple more seconds for the staff to find a different way to immobilize tom. he cudn't have done nething bcoz he was in harry's cruciatus.
hawaiikel chapter 2 . 1/25/2006
whoa thats a really good chapter! did u win the challenge?
hawaiikel chapter 1 . 1/25/2006
wow! i can't believe u pulled that plotline outta ur (figurative) ass lol. thats an interesting challenge tho. i like how harry didnt have to b head boy bcoz then he wudnt have been able to get away with so much.
Crystalshard chapter 3 . 11/27/2005
Excellent! I liked this fic, even it was sad. You described well Ginny's feelings and Tom was very crazy! Poor Ginny, poor Harry, Hermione, Ron and Weasley's, I feel sorry for them, Tom is terrible!
astraeos chapter 3 . 8/5/2005

Yeah, brilliant. Poor Ginny. *pats*

Sorry, I'm too lazy to review all three chapters like I really should, but I love your Luna, she's wonderfully in character and random and fun, and your Ginny's lovable-or was. And Tom's actions against the trio were brilliantly evil, I must say. No better way to break them.

Overall, great job, as always-just evil this time, I suppose.

missBENNETT chapter 3 . 4/17/2005
really really good. -puts in faves- I luv Tom, he's so evil.
x chapter 2 . 1/17/2005
Just so you know you're wrong about Harry not being able to be Head Boy. Yeah read the first book. Harry's father James was Head Boy. Hmm yeah James wasn't a prefect. So there goes that logic!
Lady Lestrange chapter 2 . 9/8/2004
Oh very good. I was wondering when the story was going to get to the good stuff. Anxiously reading the next chapter.

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mammyhen chapter 3 . 8/31/2004

I love this fic cept its so *goes and sobs in a corner* I need a hug...

It is really well written though, keep up the good work chicken :D
noooooooooooooooooooo chapter 3 . 8/27/2004

This was - way, way too short. Bloody brilliant in every single aspect..

..Y'know what? I can't find enough words in the English language to compliment you, so I'll just state this:

addicted chapter 3 . 8/12/2004
WHAT! is this the end?

NO(!), i love this!
Siri916 chapter 3 . 8/2/2004



Wow, that was amazing! Yes, I am one of those too-common fan/lurkers who never review... But I am rectifying that evil tendency by saying:

THAT WAS AN AMAZING STORY AND THE MOST AWESOME ENDING! I have hardly ever seen the characters so in character! And the way Ginny turned so evil... wow, just wow. Please, please, please write a follow up! Or even better, write another one like this! Angsty stories RULE!
blahfugginblah chapter 3 . 7/31/2004
Bloody wonderful ending!

~The One and Only
blahfugginblah chapter 2 . 7/31/2004
M...the final line is simply delicious. Again, keep up the great work! Onward to chapter three...

~The One and Only
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