Reviews for Too Many Bones
Wenxi chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
That was super sweet, but also heartbreaking. You just made me notice that the book never really show closure between Nawat and the crows. Really good!
spygirly chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Aw...both sad and funny. I liked the reference to Aly's learning to speak crow, and her beauty.

THat part at the end was kind of heartbreaking. Nicely done, though.
FlyAway chapter 1 . 3/17/2006
hmm. Different, but good anyways.
Kin Pandun chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Yay! Nawat/Aly! Who CARES about this "Nayeli" chick? NxA!

At any rate, I liked how you wrote Nawat for this.

Thanks for writing,

Kin.
Yabberli chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
short but sweet. :) how cute.
Duchess Winna chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
I love this story. I love how you show us that Nawat's changed from a crow to a man not just physically, but emotionally.
shattered amethyst chapter 1 . 10/6/2004
This is so sweet, but kind of sad at the same time. I'm not quite sure why, but I really love it. It gives a different perspective and all. Awesome. *glomps*
Tuathail chapter 1 . 9/19/2004
That's very well written and quite sweet. I don't entirely get the point but...that may just be me.

Poor Nawat!
zella chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
WOW! That was impressive. It gave me a more human look at the crows (no pun intended). This is a one-shot, right? Well, it was really good! Keep it up.

Zella
DestinyHunter chapter 1 . 7/6/2004
WOW I LIKE!is nayeli gonna cry cuz she loves nawat? anyways update soon!
pinky chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
aw that was sweet...nawat must really like aly...short...but good writing! write more if ya can...i wudnt mind to read n/a...ther rnt many of em out there...sad...nyways continue plz if u can!