Reviews for House of Cards
vanillavillian101 chapter 3 . 11/16/2012
Written so beautifully, but such a sad story.
IT chapter 3 . 12/5/2007
This is one of the angstiest stuff I ever bereother comment to. I'm really scared that I liked it, and what I liked the best was the way of narrating the thing. Kinda cool...

Shame there's no more.
Viviane Renard chapter 3 . 11/11/2007
Twisted, terrible and yet brilliant. The conflict-internal and between Peter and Harry-was written artfully and emotionally. I seriously felt tears well up in my eyes while reading this, you made it so heart-rendering.
exitlight chapter 3 . 11/1/2007
Whoa.
Armida chapter 3 . 6/8/2007
This was amazingly powerful. I normally do not read non-con stories, but I'm so glad I took a chance on this one. This is exactly how I believe Peter would react to a situation like this. And your closing line is a killer. So bleak, yet so perfect.
Carlita286 chapter 3 . 5/17/2007
That was very intense, you wrote it really good and believeable
Jen chapter 3 . 2/2/2007
The detail of their mental state and reason, plus the subtle power struggle and Consent vs Force, makes it hard for me to find the right words to describe such a piece. That was wonderfully written, it's simple on the surface but really deep once you analyze what's really going on. Good work
Zuraffo chapter 3 . 1/31/2007
I am glad I finally found this. Your writing style complement the mental state of the characters exceedingly well.
moonlightBuffy chapter 3 . 8/16/2006
Oh my... This is just... oh my... I love this story so bad. I mean, it's dark and scary and it's probably just my twisted mind that finds something recembling a little bit of fluff in it but anyways, I adore this fic so bad and I'm sorry I can't five you anything more constructive but I really love it :)
Falcon's Jade chapter 3 . 8/7/2006
0_0 The angst. I feel sorry for them, almost. I can see Fuuma and Kamui from the anime X(19) written all over here. Very good work though, wonderfully impressive
Socksy chapter 3 . 9/23/2005
Second time I've read this, must have forgotton to review first time..

Wow. This story is just so.. good. Depressing, but good. Harry's such a nasty guy and Peter's such a.. well, a pushover. Such an awesome story :)

I envy your talent :x
Yanaya chapter 3 . 5/22/2005
God. This is so... Angst. There's no other way to describe it. I especially liked these lines:

"Peter has always known how to hurt him the worst, even if he doesn't mean it. But this time, Harry thinks he does. Because this time, Peter isn't silent.

This time, Peter screams."

That was so brilliant. Angst, pure angst, but brilliant. I came here by recommendation and didn't see it was angst, but well, it was great.

Thanks for this piece of... angst. ;)
Dark Gotham chapter 3 . 12/3/2004
Damn, this is so freaky, and I mean this in the nicest way as possibel. But dear God. I have never read a slash Fan Fiction like this before. Hell, I don't think I have ever read a Fan FIction like this before, and I have been reading Fan FIction for a really long time.

I think I'm going to have to re-read this because it's so painfull to read it all at once, and have it all sinck into you're brain just the first time.

But oh dear God this is good. I hate Harry so much in this but I'm glade that you get into Harry's head and try to justfie his actions. Most writter's who write rape completly miss that. Just damn wow.
Velchan chapter 3 . 11/1/2004
Wow...(shiver) Written so well...and I can relate to it, kind of...(sigh)

Ja bye-bye.

Vel
Artemis Zephyr chapter 3 . 10/31/2004
Ah, so much for happy endings? Or is this even the ending? Could be, but if I know you at all it isn't. *grins*

Loved the use of italics; it really drove the point home on certain introspective characterizations. Nicely done...though there was a lot of italics used. Didn't bother me too much. Loved it, per usual.

Artemis Z.
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