Written so beautifully, but such a sad story.

This is one of the angstiest stuff I ever bereother comment to. I'm really scared that I liked it, and what I liked the best was the way of narrating the thing. Kinda cool...

Shame there's no more.

Twisted, terrible and yet brilliant. The conflict-internal and between Peter and Harry-was written artfully and emotionally. I seriously felt tears well up in my eyes while reading this, you made it so heart-rendering.

Whoa.

This was amazingly powerful. I normally do not read non-con stories, but I'm so glad I took a chance on this one. This is exactly how I believe Peter would react to a situation like this. And your closing line is a killer. So bleak, yet so perfect.

That was very intense, you wrote it really good and believeable

The detail of their mental state and reason, plus the subtle power struggle and Consent vs Force, makes it hard for me to find the right words to describe such a piece. That was wonderfully written, it's simple on the surface but really deep once you analyze what's really going on. Good work

I am glad I finally found this. Your writing style complement the mental state of the characters exceedingly well.

Oh my... This is just... oh my... I love this story so bad. I mean, it's dark and scary and it's probably just my twisted mind that finds something recembling a little bit of fluff in it but anyways, I adore this fic so bad and I'm sorry I can't five you anything more constructive but I really love it :)

0_0 The angst. I feel sorry for them, almost. I can see Fuuma and Kamui from the anime X(19) written all over here. Very good work though, wonderfully impressive

God. This is so... Angst. There's no other way to describe it. I especially liked these lines:

"Peter has always known how to hurt him the worst, even if he doesn't mean it. But this time, Harry thinks he does. Because this time, Peter isn't silent.

This time, Peter screams."

That was so brilliant. Angst, pure angst, but brilliant. I came here by recommendation and didn't see it was angst, but well, it was great.

Thanks for this piece of... angst. ;)

Damn, this is so freaky, and I mean this in the nicest way as possibel. But dear God. I have never read a slash Fan Fiction like this before. Hell, I don't think I have ever read a Fan FIction like this before, and I have been reading Fan FIction for a really long time.

I think I'm going to have to re-read this because it's so painfull to read it all at once, and have it all sinck into you're brain just the first time.

But oh dear God this is good. I hate Harry so much in this but I'm glade that you get into Harry's head and try to justfie his actions. Most writter's who write rape completly miss that. Just damn wow.

Wow...(shiver) Written so well...and I can relate to it, kind of...(sigh)

Ja bye-bye.

~Vel

Ah, so much for happy endings? Or is this even the ending? Could be, but if I know you at all it isn't. *grins*

Loved the use of italics; it really drove the point home on certain introspective characterizations. Nicely done...though there was a lot of italics used. Didn't bother me too much. Loved it, per usual.

~Artemis Z.