|Reviews for Love and War: A Change of Fate|
| Darth Deedlit chapter 21 . 4/15/2013
Well this was the first fanfic I ever read... it was a long long time ago, it was not even finished. Now I see you updated? Haha, well maybe there that means you edited but I find this a great oportunity to read this marvel again. Cheers!
| BrownEyedHoneybadger chapter 32 . 2/28/2013
I've read this maybe four times and I'll never get tired of it. Incredible work. Well done. :D
| Scorpion DOADA chapter 33 . 9/24/2012
Super Kool Story...
| Gaara the Bloody chapter 5 . 12/2/2010
Hey you do it again. I just drop by to show the FF my girlfriend and I saw you repost it. It seems you cannot get enough and thats fine. I like the way. Respect!
| She Who Dances Under The Moon chapter 4 . 10/2/2010
I haven't been actively searching for mistakes but I noticed two things as I read. First, a typo there: "I plan to set out on a quest to rid Lodoss of Karla's -medaling- forever" (I believe you meant meddling)
The other thing is not a typo but an anachronism: you make Ashram open a door by turning a doorknob. ROLW is a fantasy story but it is still set in a medieval-ish era, and at that time doorknobs as we know them were a yet-to-be-discovered feat of technology. (they only appeared over her in the late 1800s :) )
There were doorhandles, mind, but not the kind we have now that have to be turned. :)
Keep it (back) up! :D
| SheWhoDancesUnderTheMoon chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
'Globins, they aren't too imposing at first glance,[...]
Little mood-destroying typo there. :)
| Jon Turner chapter 32 . 9/18/2009
Ashram and Parn working together to stop Wagnard? That's quite a change of pace from the OVA. Seriously, though, I really LOVED this chapter a lot. LODOSS is one of my favorite Anime, and I especially love this climax-it always gets me on the edge of my seat every time I watch it. I am amazed that you even manage to use the dialogue from the dubbed version! LODOSS is also one of my all-time favorite dubs, and this particular final episode is so dramatic to watch in English. I can just hear it right now as I'm reading your chapter; Wagnard's evil laugh (supplied by Bruce Winant), Parn's heroic cries (Bill Timoney), and Ashram's VA, JohN Knox. And to think that this dub was made in 1996!
| kurahieiritr JIO chapter 33 . 9/9/2009
I am pleased to see that an author has finished a full story and so add this to my favorites as a way to support such dedication. Not many have bothered to complete a work before publishing. Congratulations are in order. Thanks for having such dedication also.
I see many grammer and word errors, yet the story itself is worth the read if one chooses tooverlook the need to use a word processor program that supports grammer. Words are sometimes missused, but the overall feeling of the story remains intact. Good job in completing this task. It is a work of love. I have not seen the OVA mentioned, but I have the main box set. I will have to look fro the OVA now to see where some of the fights refered to came from.
| Kaiarynn chapter 33 . 10/7/2008
Wow... I am not going to lie. I really liked it. You have amazing story-telling abilities. And I loved how you made the characters seem more alive. Even though I am more of a Parn and Deedlit fan, I always did like Ashram and Pirotess as well. After reading your story, I think I like them a lot more than before. Thanx so much. It was awesome!
| steve chapter 33 . 2/26/2008
| Darth Deedlit chapter 33 . 11/6/2007
Then this project must have been very important for you.
You ,ust be very proud, right? :)
Is an amazing journey, I really loved it. I wish I can see more of your work around here soon!
| Epicweaver chapter 33 . 11/5/2007
Great story! Very true to the anime, even to the end. I really liked it... I enjoyed your setup as well as Ashrom's dialogue. The story as a whole felt really true to the depth of the Ashrom/Pirotess characters and did great justice to their relationship.
I think your story has set a high bar for any future Ashrom/Pirotess fanfiction in the future.
Great work! And thanks for all your effort in finishing it.
Hope to see more good stuff from you in the future.
| Gaara the Bloody chapter 33 . 11/4/2007
Wow a long time since the beginning. I like the way you chanced the things. Very very good. I hope you write another one because you are a fantastic writter.
| Epicweaver chapter 29 . 10/29/2007
Muwahahaha... Finally... Parn and his group of adventurers left to the mercy of Ashram! Interesting end... and a good read... I like that Pirotess has basically become Ashram's biggest weakness and true fear.
I hope to see some of her perspective towards Ashram soon. Some dialogue would be pleasant as well.
As far as your story goes, I think it's coming along nicely.
And I'm basically with you till the end or till I die whichever happens first. I guess I could have my corpse animated to check email for alert updates...
But then you just wouldn't get quality reviews like this one, ne?
| Epicweaver chapter 28 . 10/29/2007
My only question regarding this chapter is...
Why didn't Wagnard just kill Ashrom before leaving? It's his goal.. and it seems like he's powerful enough to do it... Why?