Reviews for Evolution
Princess of aura chapter 23 . 2/3
Kinda weird ending.
SirAlexei chapter 23 . 11/1/2020
That was a strange finale, but appropriate.
SirAlexei chapter 5 . 11/1/2020
Oh shit. It's Giovanni. This is very not good.
Sein Hall chapter 14 . 6/14/2020
this whole story is basically a romance instead of the Magian thing. at least choose one plot instead of making the main focus of the story a sub plot
MovedToA03 chapter 1 . 3/9/2020
This fanfic is older than me, by like a month
To Oak chapter 1 . 2/12/2020
Dear professor,
Maybe one should not catalog Ash as a pokemon. You can still treat him entirely like a human without classifying him as a Pokémon. Wow. That is not moral in any way.
Hz chapter 1 . 1/18/2020
So everything is going great until you reach chapter 13 then it just gets ridiculous to summarize my already review that I posted I rewrite would be great just remove song of the add-on characters like someone said this went from Pokemon to Harry Potter in a couple of seconds
Hz chapter 18 . 1/18/2020
The first of all the possibility for evolution in the human Pokemon idea concept was pretty cool haven't seen that one before but the story just got ridiculous when you added more characters it was too much to follow and you made things go ridiculous especially making everyone forget and adding more people like ash it just doesn't work I'm sure you could have tried something else but I don't know like maybe you sent them continuing honest Adventures where he levels up or maybe continuing the work was the professor and how they evolved or we having him get captured by Team Rocket I don't know but adding more characters didn't work maybe you could go back and rewrite this all in all it was a great idea until it got messed up
Bar22 chapter 5 . 12/6/2019
No offense, but why doesn't Ash remember who Giovanni is?
betrayed666 chapter 14 . 8/3/2019
i have an o.c like your magians. he is very powerful though and the only similarity is that he is part pokemon and immortal.
RandomRamune chapter 1 . 3/30/2019
I love this story! You’ve done an excellent job, there are some spots early on that the pace drags a bit too much, but it clears up after we meet Ken. Overall this is one of the better fan fictions I’ve read and now have reread _
Cyde chapter 9 . 5/10/2018
I love how, despite the fact that Ash is evidently the Kanto champion, no one knows who he is. And the people who DO know who he is still don't treat him with any respect.
LucidAura42 chapter 23 . 4/21/2018
Yeah...that was great! Nice plot, good storyline management, and to top it all off the story is COMPLETED! Don't see *nearly* enough of that with the good stories. Sure, I would have liked the ending to draw out a little bit further, but it worked out how it did pretty well, so I can't really complain.

One thing I will complain about, though: typos. You had tons, frfom misspelling words, to writing two forms of a sentence at once, to completely omitting words or even half a word. You really ought've done better editing. And it's not even that difficult, just basic editing. Which I'm sure you did, but perhaps looking back on it at a later date would have been more beneficial.

Regardless, I say this story has been one of my favorites. Great job!
5543mj chapter 12 . 4/15/2018
“Gee, Ken what are we going to do tonight?”
“The same thing we do every night ash”
“Try to take over THE WORLD!”
“Cough cough... fly, I said fly, we try to teach you how to fly”
Prone to Shapeshifting chapter 15 . 3/4/2018
Slate is Brock's ancestor
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