Reviews for How to Eat a Strawberry
Raven of the Shades chapter 1 . 7/20/2011
ohhhhh i love it
Mad Maudlin Hart chapter 1 . 4/13/2008
If you are a vermin:

First, storm Redwall with a horde of foxes holding Sharp Pointy Objects...
Lapin Ferret chapter 1 . 4/2/2006
o.m.g that was funny.
Billios chapter 1 . 2/26/2006
Love it love it love it! LOL! oh I love those type of things. heehee. *chuckle*
Elven Fish chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
I love this! I laughed for 2 minutes when I read it and my when I told my friend, she laughed, too.
Nightsparrow chapter 1 . 7/1/2005
Germophobia For Dummies :)
Denjertheotter chapter 1 . 3/18/2005
Whew! I'm finally done showing everyone in my family about this... In other words, amazingly fun, but i nt needs a sequel, like, how to eat a banana, grape, etc...
Bunny Hooded Bombchu chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
You forgot the part where you douse the strawberry in powdered sugar. Heheheh. Good fic, though.
Duel Battle and War chapter 1 . 8/17/2004
This is funny. I think I would fit under a hare/dibbun. :)
luxraisin chapter 1 . 8/7/2004
er...very interesting. Never thought of it that way. I s'pose I'm more the slighty-less-than-slightly-less-than-meticulous-but-kinda-sloppy-beings, type person...
saber-otter chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Aye, some more Redwall references might be useful. Y'know, to fit the catergory.

Rather fun overall, though...I'd say, pick something else taken for granted and give directions in the same sort of way...but a little more Redwall-related. How 'bout each step being written with a specific species in mind?
T.L. Maraudett chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Lovely and funny. I've just found out what type of strawberry eater I am! I'm one of those slightly-less-than-meticulous-but-not-overly-sloppy-beings. At least I'm not llike my brother who is a hare/dibbun :) Keep on writing. I can't wait for the next one!
AnvilBlue chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
Well, good job on writing something of this type, kinda funny in the 'Idiot's Guide to eating strawberries' spoof sort of way. It just seems like you don't have a heck of a lot to work off of since eating strawberries isn't too too complex. I think the last part was probably the best though, pretty funny, work more Redwall-ish humor in and it'd probably sound better.


ps~if this sounds harsh it's probably because I'm not normally a fan of Redwall humor/spoofs/guides and that sot of thing, I prefer stories. Hope you stick around an' write one.
Darth Sissy chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
This is good! Write more! PLEASE!

sphinxx chapter 1 . 7/9/2004
That was funny you should do more
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