Reviews for Downfall of the Light 1
kevin steward chapter 10 . 5/2/2016
I love the story so far. And I was wondering if naruto is going to have more girlfriends?
xNaruHina chapter 3 . 2/6/2016
He says he always tries his best but being blindfolded is handicapping yourself so that isn't trying your best... Sadly this fic seems like its going nowhere, not many things are consistent so far.
xNaruHina chapter 2 . 2/5/2016
Man you give Sakura a lot of abilities .-. Half of them would definitely be better off with Hinata for sure.. Also, if you are having the abilities increase 'stats' such as speed by a set amount, i.e 40, then you would have to come up with a base movement speed (and any other relevant 'stats' that will be increased by abilities) for each person.
The Sassy Sylveon chapter 7 . 11/14/2015
This is to this guests, and others, who hate sakura so much. sasusaku is cannon look it up and has she dressed up in short outfits?no, so she's not slutty, use a dictionary for once to actually find definitions and not use your so called 'truth' and other excuses (I would use shit or crap,but I won't be using it in the right context that way) you will say(that goes out to the guests especially).to be honest I liked narusaku the first time I watched the first few episodes on Netflix *barfs and shivers*, worst dubbing ever by the way, and then I saw the potential couple sasusaku could be. and then I flipped the shit to the fan with my fangirling tatics(ahhh the joys of annoying everyone), it's so fun to do by the way! I love the story and it's potential, although I know hate how there is a bit of Sakura bashing. I think I'm done with my job here soja' ne!
Raven1302 chapter 4 . 10/30/2015
The ramen stand is ichiraku and the waitresses name is ayame :)
Guest chapter 2 . 10/17/2015
Superficial means its really just for show, not really affecting statistics. You used it very incorrectly on 2. Path of the Exiled and Jutsu List, death coil. It states that the damage of the jutsu is very high, so its one or the other
Storm Advisory chapter 8 . 5/29/2015
Learn english grammer plz? I tried to read it but the grammer just keeps getting worse to the point it's worse than just an annoyance.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/26/2014
What the hell asshole? Shikamarus team passed as well u know. It was them that came to slutty sakuras aid cause shes a weakling! This story is ok except for the fact that sasuke will NEVER like sakura! And she has been given fake power! Sakura will always be a pathetic and whiny weakling. Never strong. And NEVER with sasuke!
Guest chapter 3 . 5/13/2014
Why the fuck does this have sasusaku in it when the slut is hated by sasuke and shes evrn worse in this story! Also she shouldve failed the ecam since she was totally shit!
MadokaMagica1998 chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
It looks good i will read later
SushiSauceMaker chapter 13 . 9/12/2013
Love the story so far
SushiSauceMaker chapter 8 . 9/12/2013
Omg Yeah I've been waiting for that moment
SushiSauceMaker chapter 4 . 9/12/2013
Nice story
devin.sampson.3 chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
Anaea chapter 6 . 4/20/2013
I hope this story gets revised soon. It seemed interesting at the beginning, despite the mind reading and too-strong Naruto, two things I dislike in fanfics.

The author notes should be taken out. You get to communicate with your readers before and after each chapter, that's enough.

I don't think that I've ever read, seen or heard the word Mana in Naruto; Chakra is Chakra.

If you ever revise/edit this story, let me know, I'd like to try reading it again.
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