|Reviews for The Pieces of the Puzzle|
| naruto uzamaki namikaze angel chapter 11 . 3/12
I love this wait for you to continue it
| 444dodo444 chapter 13 . 11/24/2013
I want Kega to end with Arianna :'(
| samaurai chapter 14 . 6/6/2013
The walls are breaking.
| Lyzus chapter 14 . 5/23/2013
wow it's sooo cool! I love this new Yugi :D pleeease don't let him be with Yami! I like Arianna and I don't want this story to be YxYY. I'm sick of reading that everywhere..
| 444dodo444 chapter 14 . 3/9/2013
OMG! I love this fic so much! XD ...and i must say... i don't want Yami and Yugi to end together. I really like how Yugi has changed. I ship him with Arianna so much, they're such a great couple. :)
| lv90047 chapter 14 . 3/8/2013
Hmmm...never once did I EVER imagine them as a couple. But the story was beautifully written nonetheless. Even though this isn't my number one yaoi couple, I appreciate the effort you provided when you wrote this. And because of that, I enjoyed it very much.
I hope you write another one soon. :)
| kit-lelouch ai chapter 14 . 1/31/2013
i want to see how this ends, i would like for yugi to be with atemu again and you might want to fix atemu's name for chapters 1-13. and it not that i dont like the girl yugi's married too its just that if you put yugi with someone other than his yami the whole meaning with yugi and atemu being hikari and yami just flies out the window
| kate chapter 14 . 1/26/2013
Please put up chapter 15 soon and hurry
| ChibiGaia chapter 14 . 1/26/2013
Ahhh, as usual. Your chapter was so wonderful, interesting. It kept me wanting more, and I kept receiving it! Your cliffhangers are really awful, by the way. I hope that you update soon!
| Twin Kats chapter 14 . 6/5/2012
Members of FFN that are revolting against the mass purge of stories that has been happening. Please read and understand this: I support you. I understand what you are going through, but VIOLATING THE TOS and GUIDELINES that we have all agreed to is NOT the answer. You are, instead, further the deletion of your own stories. Please, please reconsider posting this petition as a story chapter. Please take a moment to read the Guidelines and TOS to be sure you know exactly what you are protesting.
Since 2002 FFN banned the Fiction Rating MA which is defined as "contains explicit material FOR ADULTS ONLY" which, as some of you may know, is similar to the movie rating NC-17. Before 2002 you could post all the fictional porn you damn well wanted on this site. I remember back then, when I first unearthed FFN, that they had a system in place that WARNED you the content you desired to read was for 18 and older. You had to click YES.
Now there is no warning in place and as such there is no setup to PROTECT FFN from the furious parents. All that sex and porn related stories on this site are out in the open for CHILDREN who should not, in any manner of the word, read porn. Oh sure you have ten year olds hunting down porn sites, its normal, and parents don't always monitor what their children do on the internet, but the fact remains. FFN is LIABLE for all this stuff you put up because they have no system set in place to make their asses covered.
The Ratings Violations are a big problem on this site. We may not know or wish to recognize this, but this "purge" has long been coming. What you need to understand is this: If you want CHANGE then DO NOT BREAK THE RULES for it. That only makes things worse. Notes or non-story content are not allowed as story chapters. This is a basic Guideline which has remained unchanged since 2008. People violate this every day, and I understand the need to keep in touch with your readers. However this won't change, and FFN won't add in any more ways to keep in touch or will even change their guidelines, without prompting from you.
THIS MEANS THE FOLLOWING instead of copying the protest and placing it in your stories, copy it and e-mail it to support AT fanfiction DOT net where it SHOULD go. Try and make suggestions for ways the site could be better, such as a way to protest violation claims, or to have violations claims made clearer. For the area that violates the TOS and GUIDELINES to be highlighted and to have time given to CORRECT the violation. Sometimes we violate the rules and we don't even realize it.
The letter that has been going around has made other, wonderful suggestions. Such as making FFN entirely members only. That upon signing up you MUST give your age, which will then restrict what levels of story you could read. That stories can only be READ by members. Membership, of course, would be free. This would do away with "anonymous" reviews that leave you unable to get in contact with your reviewers, and help lower spam. The membership could come with an outright disclaimer and mention that some content within may be inappropriate for children, thus covering FFN's asses on the legal end. Then the site could, perhaps, allow the return of the MA rating and clear a good portion of the stories on this site that happen to be in violation.
I URGE YOU ALL to stop reposting the letter you are finding as chapters. It is not going to help. IT IS A VIOLATION OF THE GUIDELINES even. Instead send them your thoughts and your protest to support AT fanfiction DOT net That way your voice will be heard. That way your protest will count.
| Twin Kats chapter 13 . 6/5/2012
FFN isn't STARTING the banning of MA fics. MA rated fics have been banned SINCE 2002. This is nothing new. This is just a crackdown that has long since been coming to this site. Now that the majority of its writers have been made aware that technically they've been breaking the rules, the authors are rebelling. Now we can finally make a change to FFN's policies by protesting through the proper channels.
| kate chapter 13 . 5/10/2012
Please put up chapter 14 soon and hurry
| andysanime chapter 13 . 5/5/2012
Good job on this chapter.
| Spindlegal chapter 12 . 7/14/2011
Lol Ok I'm reviewing for the all the chapters so far in this one review.
I have to admit I love how Yugi has changed in looks and personality. Personally I love a cursing Yugi who has muscle and can take charge. And the tattoos and piercing is a sexy touch ;)
The scene in the car with Yami and Bakura had me rotflmfao that was hilarious! And when Yugi was like "You idiot Pharaoh don't you recognize your own hikari?" I was look BOOYA!
I kind of like how Yugi has a wife and isn't with Yami. I mean it seems kind of hard for me to see how Yugi will end up with Yami because obviously Yugi isn't turning back to his old self and Yami is in love with the old Yugi. His old personality and ect. And I really hope Yugi doesn't divorce his wife. I at least wish she dies or something that way she wont be totally heartbroken.
| andysanime chapter 12 . 7/5/2011
I can't wait for the next chapter.