Reviews for Marshmallows
Riti chapter 1 . 6/26/2019
This was so adorable so amazing
uni chapter 1 . 12/23/2016
this is lovely 3
neither here nor ethere chapter 1 . 1/13/2016
Marshmallowy fluffy goodness. Sweet and utterly believable. And the narrator is inspired. Thanks for writing it!
Amelia chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
That was really good, you should make it longer! Id read it five more times!
mee chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
Omg that was soo emotional and very good written!
Hermioneforevs chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
nice way to end
nerdygirl1172 chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
O my goshhhhh that is sooooooooooooooooooooo cute!'mmn
LoveHate123 chapter 1 . 8/18/2013
I was confused at first, with the POV of the spider. Haha. Very sweet :)
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwi love it
chai garg chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
amazingly can actuly bcome a screenplay.. the way you took in the characteristics of ron and hermione..hoping to see sm more of it :)
iminyourimagination chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
I loved this! just imagine their awkward conversations after that...

makes me cringe in the best way possible!
StarryScarstar chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
This is the most origenal story I have ever seen in my life. The idea of an acromulta hiding in Gryffindor tower, stealing marshmellows is quite cute and funny...and I let out a fangirl squeal when Ron and Hermione kissed.
Megan chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
WOW that was really well written! i loved it. It sent shivers down my spine! GO HR!
meepa chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
Kayla chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
This is really cute Great job
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