Reviews for Gods and Demons
MaIisp.17 chapter 15 . 10/13/2018
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I'm still not completely happy with this chapter being in present tense, but it seems sort of right… oh well.

I'm too curious
RRamsaNaruto64 chapter 34 . 10/13/2018
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His tail twitches as he ponders this. His mother had moved her kittens once or twice; he sees nothing wrong with that, new places are always more fun. He does not understand "aunt" and "uncle"—there was only his mother and his littermates. Humans did not always broadcast their meanings very well, he had found; they seemed to rely too heavily on words.

I'm too curious
Aersani.62 chapter 37 . 10/13/2018
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Her face is old and young at the same time, the freshness of youth obvious while simultaneously giving the appearance of a wisdom that preceded life. Her hair is green and blue, streaked with silver; her lips are bluish, though not with cold. Her eyes…

Impossible.
VTriumiumph 73 chapter 40 . 10/13/2018
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"This is Sparky. He's my friend," she says brightly, looking up at her uncle.

Impossible.
Sopmpophp-38 chapter 23 . 10/13/2018
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"I know what fire you need."

Strange O.o
Ssuke76 chapter 12 . 10/13/2018
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'Sparky' winces. He wishes she could understand him properly so he could tell her his name.

Amazing!
KirtX63 chapter 16 . 10/13/2018
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"Uncle Max? Uncle Maaaaax," she calls.

Wow!
TaySophorphia65 chapter 31 . 10/13/2018
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Her eyes are as black, entirely black, as the void between the worlds. It is difficult to hold her gaze for long, but occasionally a star seems to fall across the blackness.

Come on...
Tattletalewin80 chapter 6 . 10/13/2018
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The region is a twisted, mutated sort of circle of land, reaching from the cold, dark north to the tropical equator. The majority of its mass lies in the south, east and northeast. In the west and northwest, beyond the central sea, countless islands are to be found, and on the largest of them… the elites of the league.

Wow!
EmiyEmaX71 chapter 39 . 10/13/2018
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It is tempting, but our attention must be turned to a more unremarkable portion of the land. We focus in on the grassy plains on the eastern quarter…

What is that?
TayberX67 chapter 18 . 10/13/2018
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Nocturna swallows. She is powerful, in more ways than one, but there is something about the other woman that makes her ill at ease.

What is that?
TaylaylommaX44 chapter 31 . 10/13/2018
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He remembers seeing her running through the grasses for the first time, after leaving his mother and siblings for good. He had been warned about humans and their spherical prisons, but this one had looked young and harmless. Her eyes had put him in mind of his siblings, although his own eyes were beginning to develop flecks of violet. They had played together every day after that, the girl sometimes bringing him strange pieces of flesh; he brought her a mouse once, but she hadn't been hungry.

What is that?
Erwirer 34 chapter 40 . 10/13/2018
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"Patience, child."

Give me a break :(
Thonnisis 54 chapter 21 . 10/13/2018
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His tail twitches as he ponders this. His mother had moved her kittens once or twice; he sees nothing wrong with that, new places are always more fun. He does not understand "aunt" and "uncle"—there was only his mother and his littermates. Humans did not always broadcast their meanings very well, he had found; they seemed to rely too heavily on words.

Impossible.
SampaImp 47 chapter 32 . 10/13/2018
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She tells her.

What a beautiful piece of literatur.
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