Reviews for Gods and Demons
ThmaberX94 chapter 12 . 10/12/2018
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The man hears her, and runs toward her. He comes to a stop, panting slightly, and runs a hand through his chestnut hair. "Moriko! We were so worried after you ran off… hell's bells, what is that?" he says, suddenly, noticing the sparkat.

Cool!
Liruto.55 chapter 20 . 10/12/2018
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Her eyes are as black, entirely black, as the void between the worlds. It is difficult to hold her gaze for long, but occasionally a star seems to fall across the blackness.

this is gold...
Onni25 chapter 17 . 10/12/2018
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He sits down beside the girl, whose sobs have lessened in frequency, and nudges her with his snout. She looks up, eyes red-rimmed and her face surrounded by the dusty tangle of her dark green hair. Her eyes are the bright yellow-orange of mango flesh; the unusual color puts the people she sometimes meets in mind of some predatory animal.

Amazing!
TriutantannisX46 chapter 31 . 10/12/2018
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He sits down beside the girl, whose sobs have lessened in frequency, and nudges her with his snout. She looks up, eyes red-rimmed and her face surrounded by the dusty tangle of her dark green hair. Her eyes are the bright yellow-orange of mango flesh; the unusual color puts the people she sometimes meets in mind of some predatory animal.

Come on...
Lseirsei.64 chapter 24 . 10/12/2018
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The pokémon was merely uttering a variety of sounds, growls and mews and chirps that should not have meant anything to the human girl. But somehow, some semblance of their meaning came across, enough for the girl to guess what he was asking. "I have to move. To the city. I have to live with my aunt and uncle…"

Nice!
Lnisnnis-77 chapter 41 . 10/12/2018
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She tells her.

What is that?
Sassukr-6 chapter 40 . 10/12/2018
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It is tempting, but our attention must be turned to a more unremarkable portion of the land. We focus in on the grassy plains on the eastern quarter…

Cool!
Herfby.62 chapter 2 . 10/12/2018
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"Ah yes." The tall woman speaks, her voice as rich and melodic as a choir. "Your forge is not hot enough."

Nice!
Esonmon.83 chapter 12 . 10/12/2018
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I'm still not completely happy with this chapter being in present tense, but it seems sort of right… oh well.

Strange O.o
MisaMisn 90 chapter 6 . 10/12/2018
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He is young, and the plains hold no surprises for him. Going to the city would be an adventure, and if the girl was… fond of him, there would be no danger from the red-and-white prisons his mother had warned him of. ((I will stay with you, if you want,)) he says.

Strange O.o
SoSopha 9 chapter 7 . 10/12/2018
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Max opens and shuts his mouth a couple times before finding a few words. "Absolutely not."

this is gold...
AlinhtX16 chapter 24 . 10/12/2018
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She tells her.

Give me a break :(
Eimph-28 chapter 8 . 10/12/2018
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'Sparky' winces. He wishes she could understand him properly so he could tell her his name.

Come on...
SarPanaceacea 38 chapter 17 . 10/12/2018
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"We are having problems, Lady."

Wow!
Sceacea 47 chapter 21 . 10/12/2018
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It is a clear night, a rare occurrence on this area of the continent, but on the mountain, every night is like this. The stars shine down, glittery as diamonds and twice as cold. The peak is the focal point of a massive eye in the perpetual storms that roar along the mountains. The furious clouds circle the peak like hungry wolves, waiting for the day when they will break free and collect—oh, it will be sweet—a debt fifty years in the owing.

Boring -.-
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