Reviews for The girl at the beach
Laserai chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
excellent is all I can say. I never got kingdom hearts. Guess i have been out of the loop a bit. anyway heard its a great game and this fanfic might just send me looking for it. well, i will be watching your progress on this fanfic like your others. awesome works, AND
Guest chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
pretty good but the i would have loved it even more if it were longer oh well. Oh and the KH2 release it seems it may be released i think late 2004 for japan and early or mid 2005 in U.S
Aeternum Lux chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
Hey, great story. Sorry, couldn't resist. Seriously, I like it. Nice to see what happens, in your view, to everyone else. And that letter from Selphie was dead-on. Just one minor snag: sentence fluency. Read these out loud, if it helps. Don't worry tho'. It doesn't detract from the story. Just somethin' to think about.