Reviews for Please and Thank You
rebecca chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
Wow.
Kunshi Sekijou chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Wow. Very unique style you have here.

It is stories like yours that makes me want to read out loud.

Thank you for a pleasant read. XD
lemon-rind chapter 1 . 8/31/2009
real well done. liked it, hated the scene but it was entrancing.
dicingalice chapter 1 . 1/6/2009
this was heart-wrenching!

_ more? please?
NeverNight chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
It's too late for please, so "Thank you."
alydhe chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Wow, this is so good. Poor Shika. I really hope Chouji wakes up. Write a sequel? Please?
MissBMarie chapter 1 . 3/26/2008
I can honestly say I loved this.

It was so beautifully written. The structure in it's entirely was perfect, his thoughts and actions, and the breathing scenes, perfectly placed. A very moving story. I only wish there was more!

Bravo my dear, I positively loved it.
Raiment chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
I have to say you're becoming one of my favorite authors...excellent as always.

*fav*
DDDDDDD chapter 1 . 11/1/2007
I really love this.

It flows very well with the occasional rise and fall.

;;

It was sad.

I really don't know what else to say.

Wonderful.
ragamuffin009 chapter 1 . 4/21/2007
I like!
StarsOfYaoi chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
aw, that was really wonderful.

short, but i love the way it's placed down. shikamaru's thoughts are he watches his best friend fighting against death, and worrying whether he will wake up or not (too scared to admit he could as well die).

wonderful shot, really, one could feel the emotions dripping from each of shika's thoughts.

thanks for writing it.

SOY
Paper Fans chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
So sweet! There isnt enough ShikaChou shounen-ai in the world!
wellduh chapter 1 . 11/17/2005
These two have the best relationship ever. I firmly thought so before reading this and sure as hell think it now.

"But here and now, sitting in a cheap plastic chair and watching the other’s chest rise and fall and rise and fall and . . .

Rise. Please rise.

Thank you."

That? That is as close to a perfect sentence (sentences, whatever) as I've seen. Wow. The rise-fall theme was used brilliantly.

Keep it up.
Freez-DeathLiver chapter 1 . 11/2/2005
;.; I think it was awsome and Chouji is way better then Shikamaru. hmph .
Jakotsu Higurashi chapter 1 . 10/6/2005
THAT'S JUST GROS!

WAIT A SEC THIS MY STORY...HEHEHE_

LOVE THE SHIKIMARA!

KILL CHOUJI!

LOVE SHIKIMARA!

KILL CHOUJI!
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