Reviews for The Inspection Of CGL
Guest chapter 2 . 6/18/2015
... Honestly? Andromeda acts like a freaking brat. And government officials sending a 13 year old girl to inspect an all-male place full of rehabilitating "convicts"? There are definite holes in the story that need to be worked out.
squidman17 chapter 27 . 11/8/2012
I think your story is A-W-E-S-O-M-E! Well put together with a serene ending. So hoping for a sequel as awesome as this story was. KEEP UP THE NICE WORK!

AmethystWren chapter 27 . 8/24/2012
I love how totally random this is! And, for the record, Andii is awesome.
axtra nonymous xxx chapter 26 . 8/11/2012
I loved this story! It was amazing and icredibly random, which made i more amazing! I know you won't have a lot of time 'cause of school and stuff but what if you wrote a sequal! It could be where Andii's parents and sis go on holiday and she invites the d-tent boys round for the holidays! Like i said before i know you won't have a lot of time but it's just a suggestion

axtra nonymous xxx
thekiralee chapter 26 . 5/2/2012






RoxyWavey chapter 1 . 10/21/2011
omg i love this story.i totally think you should do this as a zero andii fic.
MissMadi chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
I love this story, I'm rereading it again! I wish there were more Holes stories like this, everyone loves the girl-goes-to-CGL storyline but it's so difficult to find good ones!

But that's beside the point, I LOVE this story and that's why I'm reading it again. :)
Narniafan96 chapter 27 . 7/17/2011
Hi! Even though you finished this eons ago I thought I'd review! This was the flipping best Holes FF that I have EVER read! You did such a good job it's unreal! This is going on my faves list as soon as let's me log in! Grr. Anyway. I loved it! Great great great job!

McFlytheMusical chapter 27 . 1/19/2011
! One of the best things i have read in a long time! Brillianty brillianty brillianty!
ChocolateFlavouredPoison chapter 26 . 12/16/2010
I've this is my second time reading this and i absolutley love it :) x
trucalifornian chapter 27 . 10/24/2010
So, I randomly decided to log onto my FF account and go through some old stories that were on my favorites list, and I completely forgot how much I loved this story. I remember always looking forward to your updates and there was even a chapter dedicated to me.

There's something very charming about your story. Andii is likeable, quirky and relatable (I mean, we all have a weird/random side to us right?). The boys are themselves but with a goofy twist. I think that's why so many people liked your story.

I still kinda wish there was a sequel, but I understand where you're coming from. If you're still active on FF, keep up the good work. : )

dracocrazy322 chapter 4 . 8/8/2010
aaawww, you make squid even cuter than usual!
Klutzarella123 chapter 27 . 7/25/2010
thank you thank you thank you sooooooooooooo much for writing this story its amazing! Soooooo enjoyable and you really have a talent for writing!
Anmapafi chapter 24 . 6/24/2010
You wanna know what I do when I feel like crapola and all depressed and nothings going right? I come read your story. Then I feel all happy and up-si-dai-sy and the world is a pretty flower field filled with unicorns :D THANKS!
jasmine'rathbone chapter 26 . 2/15/2010
is there a sequal?

i want a sequal!

i wanna no what happens!:L
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