Reviews for One Less Star, Book 1
Key chapter 14 . 9/30/2016
I read all fourteen chapters in one night. The writing is very, very good. I like your characterisations and dialogue very much. I wish you would continue to write. I can't wait to see what happens next. Takeshi is very intriguing. But Midoriko really wasn't joking when she said all chaos would let loose if Kagome wouldn't kill Inuyasha...
Guest chapter 14 . 8/11/2016
Oh no! Just realized this hasn't been updated in 10yrs...I guess probably dropped then...I'm so sad. This is such a great story and so wonderfully told that I was really looking forward to seeing the end...why are so many great stories abandoned? T T

If you ever do finish this, that would be awesome but anyway, I hope you're well and thanks for a great read...
Guest chapter 14 . 8/11/2016
I'm glad Kouga came to the rescue...and soooo sad and mad that Sesshomaru's house is burnt down! I, like Kagome, thought of the cute puppy pictures too! T_T

I loved your story! Loved the idea of the KagomesSesshomarus. Loved the pairings! Totally didn't see KaguraMiroku or SangoInuyasha coming...and actually like them! Hopefully Sango can some sense into Yasha...actually she should be much better for him than Kikyo/Kagome I think, and she should be a good strong influence on him.

I enjoyed the IY anime series but wasn't a huge fan - while I liked Inuyasha well enough, I always thought he was a bit immature so personally never got into the YashaKagome pairing as Kagome's a surprisingly mature 15yo...but I really love the SesshKagome relationship you've got going here with the older Kagome...you really pulled me into the story!

You're a very good writer and the plotline was nicely developed with some lovely ideas. I really enjoyed the read and look forward to seeing where you take this. Thanks for sharing! :)
Guest chapter 10 . 8/11/2016
I'm loving Sessh and Kagome together! And dang, it's steamy! I popped over to the other site for the lemon hee hee...
Guest chapter 3 . 8/10/2016
Ugh, Kagome's pretty bugging here. I can't believe she's so...selfish as Midoriko put it very well, the way she angrily sticks up for Yasha even if it means her friends' death, and possibly many other deaths...

Kagura's great tho...I think you captured her essence very well. Strong, smart and cunning
Guest chapter 2 . 8/10/2016
This is so intriguing! I absolutely loved the idea, the Kagomes with their Sesshomarus (baldie Sessh lol).

Getting a bit worried about Yasha tho, seems to be very selfish and just a bad version in this one...hopefully he doesn't end up turning evil...
RG chapter 14 . 4/7/2016
I'm enjoying your story and twist on Sess/Kag. I hope you update soon, I really want to know what happens next!
By the way, how much has Shippo grown?
Darknessdawns chapter 14 . 1/19/2016
I'm so sad this amazing story has been left unfinished. So far the story has been engaging, well, written, and over all amazing in every way. Also the smut was well done. I really liked the odd pairings and really hope you come back and finish this story. Though I doubt that will ever happen. This story is definitely worth reading even in its unfinished state.
miu.sakurai.73 chapter 14 . 1/10/2016
jojo interesante!
Kilataia chapter 14 . 4/28/2014
Great story! Like it a lot :)
DANIEERU chapter 14 . 2/16/2014
Wow! Great storytelling! I hope you come back and finish!
Regina lunaris chapter 14 . 1/26/2014
Wow! Great Story!
somiant chapter 14 . 7/19/2013
Why the best stories are not complete? Wahhhhh ...your story is great ,I hope you can update _
LilBlueBear chapter 14 . 7/14/2013
Please update! XD though its been years. LOL.
Phoenix's Inferno chapter 14 . 11/10/2012
Interesting...more chapter quickly please! XD
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