|Reviews for Harry Potter and The Power Within|
| Delleve chapter 2 . 7/14/2004
Hmm. Interesting chapter. There are still a few grammar problems (wont (won't), your when it's supposed to you're, etc) but a spell check or a beta will clear that up.
You have a really nice writing style and you do a very good job at painting a picture of a scene.
| Delleve chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
You're off to a good start. There are a few grammar problems but nothing that couldn't be fixed with a good spell and grammar check and/or a beta. Beautiful beginning. On to the next chapter.
| LinearMakimachi chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
one of the best fics i've read. keep it up!
| Andrew H chapter 5 . 7/12/2004
Hey I just wanted to let you know I love this fic. You're a really good writer. I think you capture the trio's interactions wonderfully...
Update soon please...
| John Wilburn chapter 5 . 7/12/2004
Another good chapter. I'm really enjoying this story.
| John Wilburn chapter 3 . 7/12/2004
Still the same complaint. I still like the story and still think that it is well written. The spelling and punctuation is very good. Great work so far.
| John Wilburn chapter 2 . 7/12/2004
Chapters still a little short but still easy to read. Good story so far.
| John Wilburn chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
Very good, easy to read. I did think that this chapter was a little short.
| cory chapter 24 . 11/27/2004
wow! i ijust read the whole thing, and from the 1st paragraph, i could tell it'd be good! and it is! keep going! it's awesome, i love it!