Reviews for Dual! WTEL: When We Least Suspect It
Starfire99 chapter 1 . 11/11/2007
The previous review from "Jason B." belongs to me. I thought I was logged in, but apparently I wasn't.
Starfire99 chapter 4 . 11/11/2007
The previous review from "Jason B." belongs to me. I thought I was logged in, but apparently I wasn't.
Jason B chapter 4 . 11/11/2007
Once again, a very good story. But I find one part of it incomprehensible. With how devoted Yayoi was to Kazuki and how much she loved him (even after he was engaged to Mitsuki), she never would have stayed behind on earth without saying goodbye to the one she loved, Kazuki, face to face. I can't ever imagine Yayoi telling someone to say "sorry" to "her prince" in her place. That ending just kind of put a damper on the entire story, because the most dramatic part, if she left, would have been her emotional goodbye to Kazuki, since she more than likely wouldn't ever see him again.
Jts016 chapter 1 . 4/28/2005
Nice story, written very well. Kept me interested the whole way through. I like how you brought back a "background character" and found someone for Yayoi.

Rating: 10 out of 10
andyscout chapter 4 . 11/28/2004
Hey, nice fiction! Interesting plot turns... Keep it up!