|Reviews for Forgiveness|
| Elemental Ink chapter 19 . 6/15/2011
*Sigh happily* Every time I read this I remember why I love it so much! *sniff* And every time I never want it to end! A lovely equal mix of fluff and angst (which I don't normally like). Plus it has Prideshipping (my OPT)!
Although I think Yugi went over the top sometimes, I understand why he was like that: Yugi sees everything Black and White, Good and Bad, so Yami kills Pegasus Yami is Evil. But, he still needs Yami's Darkness to counter his Light - ergo, he nearly kills himself in his internal conflict (gee, I wish the actual show went into more detail about a Hikari and Yami's bond - would have made it so much more interesting! )
The fluff was a perfect balance to all the misery in this fic though. As I mentioned before, I don't normally like angst (depressess me XD) but you've got just enough cute moments between Seto and Yami to counter it, but not take the emphasis off of the main storyline.
Also, as well as the deepness of this fic, I also love the storyline! You've done a great job of changing the story of the show to fit your senario, whilst still keeping the original plot - I seriously admire you for that talent :-)
Well, I think that's all I was going to say - probably remember something else later! Overall, very well done for this and I'll probably review it again the next time I read it XD
Toodles! Elemental Ink Xxx
| Magician Girl Mirani chapter 19 . 7/18/2009
AW! That was so sweet! I LOVE this fic! I like what you did to get the three together. In my mind that would have looked awsome in the Manga or the anime! I think I might just hop over to Mediaminer to have a look at those lemons of yours. It'll be interesting.
Anyways, Yami/Seto is SO overlooked in my opinion and Yami/Seto/Yugi is even more forgotten! It's not fair! I'm so glad I found this fic!
| KyuuketsukiNekko chapter 2 . 6/25/2009
I have to say it before anything else:
Kaiba’s other hand grabbed Yugi’s neck, and he fell unconscious.
Kaiba is a Vulcan! D
Sorry, done now. Ah! I love this story! Puts a twist in everything! I think it'd be easier to use bold and italics for the mind stuff though, but this is good. I really love this story so far!
| Swallows a lot chapter 6 . 5/5/2009
even though this fic is realy old your still on this site writing regulatily so i felt ike commenting on this, you had Kaiba and Yugi activate spell cards as traps which wouldn't work, Mythical Space Typhoon and Despell are both spell cards.
| Clearie552 chapter 19 . 4/24/2007
BWAHAHAH 200TH REVIEW
btw i DID read the lemon version of it... it was a lot better than most typical situations. I love how you interperet relationships, and stuff, its just so awesome! I can't even explain it.
| ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates chapter 19 . 12/24/2006
This was good. Shivery good. I also read the mediaminer version, and loved the ending there. Very nice. I need to go look at your other fics now. *checks the favorite stories box* Bye!
| ReviewerWhoBegsForUpdates chapter 13 . 12/24/2006
Just out of curiousity, what was Mokuba's lifepoint count?
| Taigaa-Gina chapter 19 . 9/27/2006
Finally! A KaibaxYamixYuugi threesome! Thank you SO much! You have NO idea how long I've been searching something like this! Thank you! -
| Yuko6754 chapter 1 . 8/19/2006
i have been reading this since i was annon. but now i'll put in a review!i hate cliffys! love it!
| Chiwizard chapter 19 . 7/28/2006
This is a wonderfully amazing story! I really enjoyed it! And your comment about Kaiba having Asperger's Sydrome was interesting...I thought about it, and realized that you're probably right. Asperger's really messes with the social ability - being around other people triggers either the obssessive thing, the aggressive thing (mostly the aggressive thing) and sometimes both.
Anyway, this was a wonderful fic. I enjoy your work and plan to go off and read more of it...right now.
(goes to read your other fics)
| Clarity2199 chapter 19 . 10/1/2005
I liked the plot idea. But the characters were way Way WAY too ooc!
I would never say not to write another fic, since practice makes perfect. Don't give up. But I do think you need to study the characters a lot more. Or maybe try some humor fics. You can easily exaddurate personalities with humor fics. ;)
| ailisa d. frieson chapter 19 . 10/1/2005
lemon lemon lemon
| YamiHaruko chapter 19 . 9/30/2005
I have been waiting for the final chapter for this stroy forever! I was dreading it was going to become like most stories on here and stop. I'm so happy you finally got up the last chapter! It was so cute! I loved it! I'm so glad Yami isn't so depressed, Seto now knows that there are people that care adn he's found them, and Yugi has forgiven Yami. The story had such a great plot to it. I've reread this fic probably 3 times. It's just so awesome! It has to be one of my very favorite stories I've ever read on here! Thanks so much for finally completing your fic! I'm sorry to see it end, but it ended so nicely! _ Amazing job, relly it was stunning!
| yamislight5000 chapter 18 . 7/21/2005
confusing at first but after i read the story agin and slower it made more 't wait for next chapter WITH A LEMON! I LOVE LEMON'S , BUT KNOW MORE YYxS, WANT YYxY.
please and thank you
| Ashlee Kaiba chapter 18 . 7/10/2005
oh that was great! u should write the lemon chapter next or somthing but i luv it