Reviews for The Esoteric
CallMeSoldier chapter 10 . 1/2/2014
Wah! You can't just leave it at that for all these years! Now I really, really, desperately want to know what happens next! Why did the thing take Sasuke? Where is Kakashi going? What did Iruka's mother do to seal the demon? Why is Shuntaro leaving out details? And is there going to be an epic battle at the end with Iruka and the demon? Will Iruka get Sasuke back? So many questions that aren't getting answered! Do you need someone to take the story over, or something? Please make the next chapter! I'm so desperate for more! Please!
cat chapter 10 . 6/16/2011
Please Update Pleaseeee...
Yuki Free chapter 10 . 6/15/2011
PLEASE FINISH THIS!.
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 10 . 3/13/2011
Keep going PLZ
yaoi-buddy-s2 chapter 5 . 8/3/2010
God you scared the crap out of me D: when i saw Gai i stoped breathing for a sec but it was funny great job
bamboozled shuriken chapter 10 . 6/25/2010
wheeeee, this was a really goos story. Except then I noticed that you hadn't updated since forever, and now I'm getting nervous about what happened to sasuke *squirm*

I like how you're taking things kinda slow, most stories just kinda rush into things. Anyways, good luck :)
ImplausiblyForgetful chapter 10 . 4/17/2010
Why have you not completed this! It's brilliant! Wonder why Sasuke though...

~Serial-Doodler~
KALIA chapter 10 . 8/28/2009
your story is very great ,but why you dont continue this? its took long time 4 years and you dont update. PLEASE UPDATE SOON
deliha chapter 10 . 8/28/2009
so great. i love it. but it seems that this story is a dead project and you dont want continue this. i hope you consider and UPDATE SOON
sara chapter 10 . 7/27/2009
you are horrible. it seems that you dont want continue this. its pity because your story is very very interesting. i hope you continue this.
deviltiger chapter 10 . 7/27/2009
This is a really interesting story, I love the way you've written the characters. The idea of Gai in a green floral nightgown really amused me, thanks. I would love to read more. It's not dead, right? That would be sad.
Blood Zephyr chapter 10 . 7/17/2009
-.- No. Instead of eight months, you've abandoned the story for 4 YEARS! Come ON. Update, would you?
mara chapter 10 . 3/31/2009
hey

this story is very very very wonderful. why you dont continue it? Please hurry up to continue it. please. I cant wait for next chapter
JOAN chapter 10 . 2/10/2009
THIS IS A VERY WONDERFUI STORY PLEASE CONTINUE IT AS SOON AS POSSIBLE
KATI chapter 10 . 2/5/2009
THIS STORY IS VERY INTERESTING PLEASE CONTINUE IT
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