Reviews for DBV Series 3: Preperation
Knight of elves chapter 3 . 1/1
"Awe, I wanted to see a Super Sayan with pink hair!" Goten whined. I hope you enjoyed Dragon Ball Super's Future Trunks Arc. For the first time ever a pink haired Sayan was seen.
Guest chapter 5 . 12/27/2016
You should've called Android 21 22 because she's dr Gero daughter and dr Gero turned himself an Android. And he is 21?
Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2016
You should make a dragon ball gt story where verto and trunks Goku and pan goes to space only verto or goku's a kid/teen
Guitarlover56784 chapter 8 . 2/2/2016
I noticed that you changed the power level of vertos super saiyan when he transformed into a teen ss. Back when I first read this, it was just 300,000,000. Why increase it? And the barrier the old kai reffered to, was it simply for his ki? Or his psi and ki? And does the barrier break from rage or time? Email is if you wanna respond. Still love your story
guitarlover56784 chapter 19 . 12/8/2014
Become a child again herself? That sends my imagination spinning with what would have happened between them
ZachMasters chapter 25 . 12/3/2014
Why does this girl know that Verto fought against Majin Buu when Shenron was supposed to take the memories away?
lordwolf666 chapter 26 . 6/5/2014
Wow i love DBZ and what you've done is add more to it
TheMysteriousAlpha chapter 26 . 2/22/2013
Great story and I liked Verto going back to Planet Vegeta and be coming a little bit more ruthless.
Kazuma Bushi chapter 26 . 1/26/2013
All in all a good serious, your first story is still my favorite though
Kazuma Bushi chapter 25 . 1/26/2013
That whole sarah thing was pretty suspicious considering they had just wished away the earth's memory of Buu
Kazuma Bushi chapter 24 . 1/26/2013
They could have used the dragonballs to make some kind of wish about the Zergs
Kazuma Bushi chapter 23 . 1/26/2013
I don't understand why Verto would want to go back to being a child especially with all that he's got going on too
Kazuma Bushi chapter 22 . 1/26/2013
First chapter ive ever read where real an authors real life intersects with DBZ
Kazuma Bushi chapter 21 . 1/26/2013
The zergs don't really seem all that powerful, they just have huge numbers
Kazuma Bushi chapter 20 . 1/26/2013
This chapter is the exact reason why i hate Chichi in canon
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