|Reviews for Equilibrium|
| Kitty Caesar chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Woah, these are powerful words coming from Jou. O_O
But they are non the less partially true.
| Ele Goddess of Elements chapter 1 . 10/16/2005
um...that wuz weird -_-;
| once within a dream chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
Very interesting view on Jou/Kaiba's relationship
| mandapandabug chapter 1 . 1/31/2005
that's such a weird POV i like it though! this was weird and good at the same time! good too! so yeah i'll review you later_
| WhiteLightning chapter 1 . 10/11/2004
That was kinda strange. Very well written. I need to try 2nd person writing sometime...
I probably will...
| Dark Magician Of Chaos chapter 1 . 9/3/2004
Kind of confusing but good noe the less
| pu-chan chapter 1 . 8/22/2004
I'm interested in your summary.
I like the pairing...
And I LOVE angst.
| Me-O-Tojite chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
Wow, this was wonderfully written. It has a very very interesting over all outlook on thier relationship in this fic. It's very nicely put and I must say it's a bit sad. Thinking that way surely would lead someone to suicide I swear. It's a very bleak point of view. This was very good though and I hope to see more good works...not that you don't have like...177 of them. Mou, how do you write so much and keep almost all of them updated? It baffles me. Truely it does. Well, I think I'm going to actually sleep tonight. It's 1:33 am here and I need some rest. Well, I hope to see an update for slam dunk soon. That's also one of my favs. Good luck. And cheerio. _
| Killian chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
| MarikzGal4Eva chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
great chapter. will you continue?
| DarkShadowFlame chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
::winces:: Och, poor Joey. I had a lot to say but it all suddenly flew out... anyway, this is one twisted relationship. Like I said, I've had a brainfreeze, so I'll go after saying this: When Joey was 'saying' "I'm fine, my sister's fine, etc..." ; It led me to reason that people were asking if Serenity was hurt, so Joey was sleeping with Kaiba to get money to pay for (another) operation. Heh. Don't worry, it wasn't your writing that made me think that- it was just my own crazy mind.
| darkmus chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
(ok. Lemme just savor this for a bit longer before I -really- review)
Just. Wow. This style is absolutely mindblowing. Just gorgeous use of words and this type of stream of conciousness is...
Well. It's not -real- but it certainly is a pretty damn nice work of art. It's got a real "tinge" to it. Just enough to makes *lipsmack* beautiful.
I have to admit that the -he- things sort of irked me. I think it would flow better if it was italicized? Or maybe like: He.
*snerk* Seto is god. He really is.
Also the "recompense (ooh, a big word)" thing threw me off a bit... but after reading over the line twice more it sort of fit, I suppose. Scarcastic like the voice. Guess the parentheses popping up from nowhere... since all the after thoughs earlier were just... -there-... was a bit... uh. What'stheword?
... "'BAM! I'm here!' 'Wtf? Who invited you? Oh well. Have some dip.'"-ness.
Heh. Ok. Now I'm babbling. You broke my brain. Thanks.
| Sailor Starlight Girl chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
Very interesting style, although I did sort of got mixed up but meh, I always get mixed up. Overall, it was very dark but I'm sorta am getting into a bit of dark type of fics anyway. _ Great work!
Sailor Starlight Girl
| Reppu chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
"You want to see him cry. Taste his tears."
With that I sunk into a pit of endless happiness, even though the story itself was dark. That line just got to me...
This is your entry for ADL's PBFFC? Why didn't I see it last time I got a message? I dunno...maybe I was drunk then too...
I'll wrap this up (because I'm starting to babble). Great story, though a bit confusing with the sudden changes of subject (one minute it's Joey, the next it's Seto). Overall it was great.
| Icy Flame chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Hmm very twisted, but I like the perspective. You're always coming up with a new way to view things, it makes your work very refreshing. I look forward to seeing more of your stories! *grins* This was darker than my normal cup of cocoa but I enjoyed it. Great work! *grins* *waves*