|Reviews for End of the Innocence|
| afamily123 chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
| animechick chapter 1 . 7/7/2005
oh wow update this story soon
also please e-mail me when you update
| karmakaze chapter 1 . 9/6/2004
OMG, I thought you were talking about Manny. Please continue. How did Liberty get pregnant? Who was the guy? I like so far.
| KT the Shimmer Skank chapter 1 . 8/29/2004
Nice. I dug it. Wish we could have found out who the father was, though.
| Kaitlinbell chapter 1 . 8/3/2004
*squeaks* It was all...and then it was still all...then all the sudden...it was Liberty! I died! You wrote it so well. You kept me going until the very end! I worship you!
| Clarissa E chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Wow... that was a real surprise! I thought it was about Manny! You really fooled me. I can't wait to find out who the father is. Very well-written, too. I'm already waiting for the next chapter.
| dare2breathe chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
wow nice cliff hanger, i liked how u didn't say who it was to the end. keep writting
| Naladot chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
WOW. Very good, I was shocked at the end, but it was believable that it was Liberty. Very well written!
| PunkRock101 chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
This is good. Really good. Infact, it's better than MY story of Liberty! LOL
| SweetestReject chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Whoa...unexpected! I totally thought it was a different girl! OMG! update soon!
| CrazyGurliTryintowrite chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
LIBERTY, pregnant, omg, this is a new story, that is such a good idea, whos is it, omg i have to keep reading this, great story!
| Uhm chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Interesting twist at the end. You'd lead us to think it was going to be Manny but you made it believable for the other result to be the case!