Reviews for Bad Chocolate Kisses
Reaper7 chapter 8 . 3/30/2011

What did he forget! He still wears make up? Does he currently have panties on him? Is he still being controlled by Seth!

I dunno!

Still, the story was pretty awesome. I love it!
Hatori Ichihara chapter 8 . 5/27/2005
OMG! this was so funny! lol! Mysterious about Seth though... oh well, i liked the weird fairy obbsesson. lololololol :-)
XLife chapter 8 . 3/16/2005
xroseduelistx chapter 8 . 3/14/2005
WOW! That story was great! T_T Why'd it have to be over! T_T
Jade Wyvern chapter 8 . 3/13/2005
*gasps* You have a talent for writing! That was a wonderful end! O_O *snaps out of it* Good job! _~ This story rocks. You should make a sequel or something about Seth coming out to teach Moky another lesson or something... XD Well then, toodle-loo.

~Alley Cat

P.S. ...May you please read my fic? ...It may not be to your taste but...please give it a try? *puppy-dog eyes that never work on anyone*
Jade Wyvern chapter 7 . 3/13/2005
XD Poor Serenity... She's the only sane one there! AHAHAHAHA! ...Marik talking like a Valley girl...THAT was well as a lot of other things... Keep it up! _~ Though...I think there's only one chapter left to go... T_T I don't want it to end! Oh well...

~Alley Cat
Jade Wyvern chapter 6 . 3/13/2005
MWEHEHEHEHE... I LOVE the soap opera. THAT cracked me up. XD Actually, everything about this fic cracks me up... XD Well, good going. _ You rock at writing humor. _~

~Alley Cat
Jade Wyvern chapter 5 . 3/13/2005
*maniacal laughter* *incessant giggling* ...HILARIOUS! Can't wait to read more. _~ I fear for Marik...and Bakura...

"They then strung Yugi up by his leg over Kaiba’s bed and Serenity was allowed to feed him grapes till he exploded."

THAT cracked me up. Way to go! XD Good job! ...You're good at this!

~Alley Cat
Jade Wyvern chapter 4 . 3/13/2005
O_O NO! NOT SERENITY! XD God. Hershey Kisses are taking over the world... MWUAHAHAHAHA... They're EVIL! HEHE... ...I wonder if it happens to Yami as well... O_o Oh my...

~Alley Cat
Jade Wyvern chapter 3 . 3/13/2005
"God help all young attractive women within a twenty-mile radius... They were all candidates for the new Fairy Queen... "

XD YOU CRACK ME UP! AHAHAHAHAHA! This is so funny, I'm going to die laughing... Though Kaiba's sugar-high state is a bit strange...becoming a minion of Moky and all... O_o Meh. Whatever. *in a serious tone* I will not question the "Fairy King." I will obey the "Fairy King." But I will NOT be the "Fairy Queen"...Maybe. If he can get me sugar-high...probably. ~_~ *runs as fast as she can*

~Alley Cat
Jade Wyvern chapter 2 . 3/13/2005
ROFL *laughing her guts out* ...I'm laughing so hard, my parents think I'm crazy... XD THIS fic is GOOD! You seriously deserve more reviews... Hmm...but I thought Seto was supposed to eat the cake too... ...Shouldn't Seto go hyper with Mokuba as well? Hmm... O_o And, yes, that is a VERY good lesson. Smart Kaiba. *evil grin* Now how is he going to deal with this? MWUAHAHAHAHA! I can't wait till I finish...

~Alley Cat
Jade Wyvern chapter 1 . 3/13/2005
ROLF XD HAHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE this! I think you deserve more reviewers! ...I think I do too. T_T I feel your pain... ...Thinking of which...would you be interested in reading MY fic, The Two Slaves? *puppy-dog eyes* ...Pwease? *snaps out of it* Okay. Sorry. ;; Anyway, I wonder what Kaiba's planning... Hmm... *evil grin* This out to be good...

~Alley Cat
DarklordMakuta chapter 1 . 3/10/2005
can you have something really funny happen like mokuba eats too much of the chocolate and gets really fat please? thank you much.
xroseduelistx chapter 7 . 3/7/2005
Lol! Funny... Can't wait for the next chappie!


AmePiper chapter 7 . 3/6/2005

OMFG! thats so funny! i seriously cant stop laughing!

omg , you have to update asap!

seto! and marik! OMG!


okay ill shut up now, just update soon okay? gee your imagination is really something.



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