Reviews for Pain can cause many things
Akukaze chapter 4 . 9/20/2005
i really like the story but its kinda hard to read. do you think you could space it out more? update soon please!:)
afamily123 chapter 4 . 9/14/2005
Jayson Hogart. ADD MORE
afamily123 chapter 3 . 7/30/2005
This great, awesome, fantastic. ADD MORE
Neviegirl chapter 3 . 11/19/2004
Please finish this i like it alot
danielle chapter 2 . 11/18/2004
ok i know you havent updated in a while well up date now lol
DaRkDrEaMeR23 chapter 1 . 10/26/2004
Oh wow... i am left with very few words... this is great.
siren chapter 3 . 10/8/2004
it's definetely suspenseful, i wanna know what happens, PLEASE update
Allison chapter 3 . 10/6/2004
post more i want to know whats going on next
shelly chapter 3 . 10/4/2004
keep going!
alax chapter 3 . 10/3/2004
its gd but r chapters need to be longer
SCHOOLSUCKZ chapter 3 . 9/29/2004
KEEP GOING!

:) :)
danneell14 chapter 3 . 9/28/2004
great story please update really soon
Neviegirl chapter 2 . 7/21/2004
that was good so far are you gonna make Jay kick his Chris's ass for raping Emma please continue