I'll try to keep this short since this fanfic is super old.
First off, this idea is fucking amazing. Harry going to another world where he's the number 2 Death Eater, has a living family that wants him back desperately but also hold a lot of anger and towards him, and him being the hero like in the books. One of my favorite stories does this: Hiraeth on Ao3.

So the premise is pretty good, but I can't stand Harry. Like he's just... cmon, Harry is not stupid in canon. He's not a genius but keeping this lost-confused act for so long makes this frustrating to read.

If you can make it past those frustrations, this is a good story. Not bad, not great, not amazing, just good. A lot of it felt directionless because we had so much going on and also felt like the pace was too quick on certain things. This was written before even book 6 so I can't blame you for missing out on a lot of lore blocks to use here.

Very interesting story. Only criticism right now is that Harry seemed to realize he’s in an alternate dimension, but then pulled back from that in the conversation with Kingsley. The inconsistency was a bit jarring.

This Harry Potter is one of the stupidest MC's in HP's fanfiction I've ever read.

This! This right here was a great combo of Magical and Mundane suspence writing. I know this is old and you might be gone from the Fanfic world but thank you for work.

Its hard to find a good harry potter fanfic. This clearly isn't one.

how people manage to like this shit is beyond outrageous, how can someone like a story with a main character so dumb that his hatred towards his tormentor is suddenly pointless because of his own fucking stupidity.

you're really good at making Harry retarded and unlikeable, that's impressive in it's own way.

the nuclear fallout of a bomb only lasts a few years... just like a nuclear power station incident isn't that bad... a few years to a few decades at most... what stays radioactive for a long time is the waste by-products of used nuclear fuel... thousands of years.. except there are other ways to use nuclear power that isn't super toxic

Nah, I'm done. He's got no brain lol.

Dear god. The story isn't bad but Harry is so frustratingly stupid. I'm just laughing as I read at this point because of how clueless he is.

Uh, wtf?! I want Harry to be back home with his friends! Why didn’t Harry tell Lily to say goodbye to James for him? Love that Harry got a medal of valor. Even if the Prime Minister almost had him killed. Lol. This was a great story! I hope in the sequel, Harry gets back to his true home and defeats evil Harry. :)

Haha! Voldemort died powerless! So happy he got decaptiated! I hope the Prime Minister knows that Harry didn’t double cross him. And that he’s stupid to think so. Why the ruck would they be fighting each other if he thought Harry was on Voldemort’s side. I’m glad that Harry’s family is okay. And Hermione will live. Love that Ron killed the guy who cursed Hermione. Loved what Snape did to Pansy. Can’t wait to see the aftermath. :)

Damn! I can’t wait for all the bad guys to die! Love that the muggles are helping. I hope they can keep some of their memories. Or like vague memories of fighting with like a foreign ally. Nobody who’s good better die! Can’t wait for Voldemort to burn! Love that Rachel was thinking of men. Lol.

Jfc. I can’t wait for all the Death Eaters to be blown to bits. Hopefully the muggles forces being bombs, mines, guns, grenades, the whole shebang and kill them all! All being the bad guys. Lol. Damn. How long are these chapters? Lol. 17 chapters and almost half a million words?! Phew! Love it! Love that Harry can apparate safely. I hope everyone who has been taken is safe! Harry needs someone to kill him so the Horcrux can be killed.

I can’t wait for Crouch Junior to burn to death. Hermione should’ve hid her wand. I can’t believe Lily and Narcissa were friends! But she was friends with Snape too. What I don’t get is how Harry didn’t realize Voldemort got his memories of his other life. Like did he get obliviated? I hope Kingsley, Tonks, Remus, and the others are okay am they better live!