Reviews for A Stranger in an Unholy Land
Anon chapter 4 . 1/21
Very interesting story. Only criticism right now is that Harry seemed to realize he’s in an alternate dimension, but then pulled back from that in the conversation with Kingsley. The inconsistency was a bit jarring.
CoaldPlay chapter 17 . 7/31/2023
This Harry Potter is one of the stupidest MC's in HP's fanfiction I've ever read.
SanadaTenchi chapter 10 . 4/12/2023
This! This right here was a great combo of Magical and Mundane suspence writing. I know this is old and you might be gone from the Fanfic world but thank you for work.
Guest chapter 7 . 2/24/2023
Its hard to find a good harry potter fanfic. This clearly isn't one.
Makimass chapter 4 . 2/1/2023
how people manage to like this shit is beyond outrageous, how can someone like a story with a main character so dumb that his hatred towards his tormentor is suddenly pointless because of his own fucking stupidity.
Makimass chapter 2 . 2/1/2023
you're really good at making Harry retarded and unlikeable, that's impressive in it's own way.
darthvito chapter 11 . 1/23/2023
the nuclear fallout of a bomb only lasts a few years... just like a nuclear power station incident isn't that bad... a few years to a few decades at most... what stays radioactive for a long time is the waste by-products of used nuclear fuel... thousands of years.. except there are other ways to use nuclear power that isn't super toxic
MasterOfDeath7 chapter 4 . 8/29/2022
Nah, I'm done. He's got no brain lol.
MasterOfDeath7 chapter 3 . 8/29/2022
Dear god. The story isn't bad but Harry is so frustratingly stupid. I'm just laughing as I read at this point because of how clueless he is.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 17 . 7/19/2022
Uh, wtf?! I want Harry to be back home with his friends! Why didn’t Harry tell Lily to say goodbye to James for him? Love that Harry got a medal of valor. Even if the Prime Minister almost had him killed. Lol. This was a great story! I hope in the sequel, Harry gets back to his true home and defeats evil Harry. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 16 . 7/18/2022
Haha! Voldemort died powerless! So happy he got decaptiated! I hope the Prime Minister knows that Harry didn’t double cross him. And that he’s stupid to think so. Why the ruck would they be fighting each other if he thought Harry was on Voldemort’s side. I’m glad that Harry’s family is okay. And Hermione will live. Love that Ron killed the guy who cursed Hermione. Loved what Snape did to Pansy. Can’t wait to see the aftermath. :)
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 15 . 7/18/2022
Damn! I can’t wait for all the bad guys to die! Love that the muggles are helping. I hope they can keep some of their memories. Or like vague memories of fighting with like a foreign ally. Nobody who’s good better die! Can’t wait for Voldemort to burn! Love that Rachel was thinking of men. Lol.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 14 . 7/18/2022
Jfc. I can’t wait for all the Death Eaters to be blown to bits. Hopefully the muggles forces being bombs, mines, guns, grenades, the whole shebang and kill them all! All being the bad guys. Lol. Damn. How long are these chapters? Lol. 17 chapters and almost half a million words?! Phew! Love it! Love that Harry can apparate safely. I hope everyone who has been taken is safe! Harry needs someone to kill him so the Horcrux can be killed.
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 13 . 7/18/2022
I can’t wait for Crouch Junior to burn to death. Hermione should’ve hid her wand. I can’t believe Lily and Narcissa were friends! But she was friends with Snape too. What I don’t get is how Harry didn’t realize Voldemort got his memories of his other life. Like did he get obliviated? I hope Kingsley, Tonks, Remus, and the others are okay am they better live!
Leapyearbaby29 chapter 12 . 7/18/2022
There’s three devices though. And Harry only got one. So is Harry a Horcrux? Then Harry’s fine. Get Voldemort to kill him and he’ll live. Lol. Then Harry can kill Voldemort. Fuck Voldemort has Dumbledore. I love that Christine is still in the know! I hope she can teach at Hogwarts! :)
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