|Reviews for Metamorphosis|
| satomika chapter 1 . 10/31/2007
we're both riding on the same boat...
i hate Yanagi too and women who are related to her character...
i prefer someone like Fuuko who's loud and bold and daring...
because at some point, i am like Yanagi myself...
but that was before...
so i'm trying to change...
| inustorm chapter 1 . 5/8/2007
hi i luvd ur idea but it was sad...for yanagi...very sad...
| Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 10/8/2006
| TIMES chapter 1 . 12/20/2004
I love your fics so mucch
| shukuchi chapter 1 . 10/17/2004
Hm... She should've told Recca. I think she had the right to get an abortion, even though she didn't go through with it, but she still should've told him.
That said, great fanfic.
Tokiya started to protest at that, claiming that no one had mistaken her for a girl since he cut his hair, but all Fuuko did was laugh.
I love that line. Keep writing!
| Flare-Chaa chapter 1 . 8/1/2004
'Twas very nice, I enjoyed reading it.. Maybe make a sequel? Eh? You know you want too..
-Nudgenudgewinkwink- Lol. xD
| lime chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
that was really nice. not that very mushy, it's just right. hope you'll write again soon! Ja!
| angel chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Hi! I really like this one, it really shows that Yanagi is a wimpy girl. I don't like her also, all she does is to cry out for Recca. :p
I wish that this story isn't a one shot, it's really cool. Keep up the good work!
| ringgetsu chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
hey...im a tofu fan so that goes without saying i like your fic...hehehe..nic exchange between mi-chan and fuuko..thanks for dehumanizing(?) yanagi..everybody makes mistakes any i think its high time Yanagi came to the spotlight..i have nothing against her or anything but its only fair too that she's in the hotseat..anyway nice fic..
| Akira chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Squee! I love your Kindred arc! I've reread it too many times to count, and I'm really glad you made another piece for it.
If you ever do post another FoR fic soon...I shall be the first to review it...at least I'll try...
| G-Cleft chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
Hi Khay!:-) Wow, another great fic, and partially dedicated to me, I feel so ecstatic! Thanks! As usual, a standing ovation is in order. I just hope that certain someone reads this, won't be bothered that we're in cahoots to make her stay, realize how much we love her and like Nigihayami Haruko said, how empty FoR is without her. _ She already says she's feeling pang of guilts and that she never has left the fandom in the first place...right xabie?
Anyway... let's try and critique your newest magnum opus, dear.
1. Great theme. The fourth to the last paragraph captured it best.
2. Nice touch, the Tokiya-Fuuko "What would you do if you were in their shoes" exchange.
3. It's Yanagi's issue, but I couldn't help focusing on the subtle implications... how strong Mi-chan and Fuu-chan's relationship is. Oh how the subtle points are the most prominent! ;-)
4. Kawawa naman si Yanagi, but you used her to reveal the moral lesson here so I guess hindi na siya kawawa after all.
5. Good characterization for Mi-chan! Yeah! Mikagami fans are going to start a world domination campaign when they read this fic.
Hmm... I guess that's it. You don't have to worry about the sentence structure and the grammar, despite what you told me about not thoroughly mastering it, it seems to be no mean feat for you. _
Thanks for the read! I felt so rejuvenated afterwards. I'm such a sucker for your fics, you know that, right?
I'm sorry pala, I'm still working on the next chapter, and from the looks of it, it's gonna be quite long. *sigh* I promise to contact you once I'm done, though. Sorry for making you wait.
Well, this is long enough. Thanks ulit for coming up with this one, at sana maulit muli (na magdag ka pa sa iyong phenomenal kindred arc). ;-) Sige po! Ingat lagi!
| palupa chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
ah! that was so good! i'm so glad you can back to FoR fandom! Ü yes! i hate yanagi too! lol :D its so nice! thank you so much for writing it Ü
| Kaze Yurei chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
as usual your stories are GREAT, it's so good to read something of yours, things have been real lax around here :P great to read something worth reading!
yeah i'm not a fan of yanagi either, but poor her. Fuuko rocks :) keep up good work :)
| naixil chapter 1 . 7/16/2004
great story! i've been reading ur other ToFuu stories since Kindred... and i think they're fantastic! loved all the side stories too... hope to read more... *fingers crossed behind back*
| Nigihayami Haruko chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
Absolutely beautiful. I certainly hope that you manage to keep Xabie-san in fanfic-dom because it would seem empty without her,... if that really happens, I hope that I can count on you for a wonderful story! Because no one else can write an FoR like you. This fic has shown me why I love your work and I always come back time and time again. You've managed to write about something that goes beyond a romance fic. You write about things that I can feel, things that I can relate to, things that I can believe in. No relationship is perfect, no person is perfect, but people can be perfect for each other. And that's what the difference is. We're never a 100% by ourselves, but together, we can be more, much more.