Reviews for UNWANTED
Xxmutant girlXx chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
this story is okay but kid of boring sorry but it's the truth.
Matt Butcher chapter 1 . 2/4/2007
Horrible. Meaningless. Filled with cliche.
Takeshi of Gondor chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
I thought the writting was rather good, but to me this felt like a fragment of a story rather than an actual story. It needed more to it, but I know where you're coming from. I often have just specific scenes in my head that I think I awesome in one way or another and I just want to spit them out or type them or what not, but I try and build a story around them (of course I don't recommend this because sometimes you end up having to cut the scene you wrote the whole story for in the first place).
Sarah chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
Like the idea! Please write more! Lovely Greetings from over the Atlantic
LegacyReborn chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
It's not bad, even though it is a bit short P