Reviews for Back to the future
gohan21 chapter 38 . 3/22
story is ok but i think you can do better
kels chapter 36 . 1/14
Harry and his guilty complex is really annoying...really no matter what was instilled at the Dursleys he should just get a therapy and overcome it
moosejuice5 chapter 10 . 12/1/2014
So Harry's lusting after a 13 year old, I'm out.
moosejuice5 chapter 9 . 12/1/2014
So since chapter 7 her age has dropped from 14 to 13, I don't know if this was a mistake or you making harry more of a pervert, becouse he is an actual pervert in this. Have you read Lolita resently or sonthink?
moosejuice5 chapter 8 . 12/1/2014
Your way of writing speach is incredible annoying, you randomly start new lines and theirs a 50% chance of you adding punctuation when you do. Also for some reason you use colons to start speach? It's irritating to read
moosejuice5 chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
If I didn't like the first chapter and your style of writing so much the cliches in this chapter would of been enough for me to immediately stop reading - 2nd animagnus - Phoenix animagnus - super wand- ect
omh666 chapter 38 . 10/24/2014
Unfortunately going to guess that this story is abandon. I enjoyed finding it again, but sort of sucked to find that's still unfinished. Here's hoping you return to writing.
B. Krystal chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
When I read the summary it sounded like an interesting read, and the first few paragraphs did interest me.

However; I couldn't get past the first chapter, because all the spelling and grammar mistakes were driving me crazy.

Please, either correct the obvious mistakes yourself or find a beta.
fallenxxshadows chapter 38 . 9/27/2014
Soooooooo bout chapter 39...
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
You have some obvious spelling mistakes, such as thought(taught) , Defent(d). And capitalization errors.
Story-Fixer chapter 38 . 5/23/2014
One of my favorite fanfiction! Will you post a new chapter any time soon?
MISSISSIPPI -'- TROJAN chapter 38 . 5/1/2014
Please update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2014
The word you're looking for is "taught", not "thought"
Charlemagne Gryffis chapter 38 . 2/19/2014
Awesome fic. Are you going to update it?
MyeyesHURT chapter 5 . 12/16/2013
Can you PLEASE proof read this stuff? It's fine for a plot and story but it sucks having to read certain lines several times to understand!
Eg: "conceal his lack of power by read or heard knowledge or ambition" What does this even mean? Please get someone to BETA this story.
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