Reviews for Back to the future
jaqmaq77 chapter 17 . 11/29/2024
I can accept the F-ed up English (Think instead of Thing), but the blood dripping from my laptop is annoying... Harry's never ending anguish over Bella, and time travel is annoying, He knows the powers that be sent him back, but Harry's whole 'I can't change anything' is depressing, why would they send him if not to make changes? Are they that sick? They sent him back so he can watch everyone die again?
My boss sent me to re-do a report, so I wrote a word perfect copy? Yeah, that's gonna happen... I liked my job.
You bet if I got sent to baby me - I'm changing my life? Millionaire by 30... whose going to know other than the powers that be? And if they care, why send me back?
jaqmaq77 chapter 13 . 11/28/2024
in well over 20 years of fanfic's... this has to be the most convoluted and confusing story ever! It's like sending the kid to get something but not telling him what of where?
Can't change the timeline? why? and the power that sent him back is a dick, as are the bloody birdies... no, don't tell him - even thought he's fucked it up twice, just fuck him! Let him stumble, it's funny...
Asimov, The End of Eternity?... Outside time and watching. The brilliant idea of minimum necessary Change... like Ron spills his tea, and is late, gets fired... so move the cup an inch... it don't spill, he ain't late,
And changes destroy the world? No... just no.
Memememe chapter 38 . 1/6/2023
Another unfinished masterpiece.
Mar ud chapter 24 . 1/4/2023
Harry Potter was Heir to all the Founders . Half from his dad and half from his mom. Susan Bones was also a decendant of was the last Decendant of was a decendant of Griffindor thru her grandma.
Sandy chapter 22 . 1/3/2023
Actually Albus discovered 30 uses.
David Potter chapter 21 . 1/3/2023
My cousins name is Harry James Potter not your made up name of Henry.
darkphoenixshadow chapter 38 . 1/5/2023
The End
darkphoenixshadow chapter 37 . 1/5/2023
There is no Henry in Harry James Potter ! Read the book!
Sandy chapter 18 . 1/3/2023
Actually he is the owner of Hogwarts as he is hier to Griffidor and Ravenclaw thru his dad. And hufflepuff and slitherin thru his mom.
Macy chapter 16 . 1/3/2023
Grindewald not grindewalt or grindevalt
Davey chapter 15 . 1/3/2023
Lily was actually born Lily McGregory she was switched at 2 to save her from Voldemort.
Lily Evans became Lily McGregory and died that same night she was a then went on as Lily Evans the Family was spelled to think of her as thier child.
Sandy chapter 15 . 1/3/2023
It was Salazar's son that hated and killed muggles not the Father.
Markus chapter 13 . 1/2/2023
You wrote loosing it.
The word is losing it.
Me chapter 12 . 1/2/2023
Harry James Potter
James Charles Potter
Lily rose Evans
Sandy chapter 12 . 1/2/2023
Harry's mother is a decendant of Salazar so Harry can already speak parcelmouth. He didn't get that from beating the Dark Lord.
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