|Reviews for Back to the future|
| spandey chapter 2 . 9/22
Really I think u are stumbling in the dark what ever u hit...change paragraph in middle of sentence,spellings,not clear punctuations etc...
No coherence in the story.a outline is present but detailed presentation is vary vary the biggest thing is ITS A HELL LOT CONFUSING
| spandey chapter 1 . 9/22
This is as confusing as if I am in the middle of mirror house...
| Hainbuche chapter 1 . 6/18
die geschichte ist sehr schön, nur ich muss sie leider übersetzen lassen da mein english sehr schecht ist und die übersetzung packt alles in einen riesigriesigen... risiegen block ohne einen hauch von absatz dazwischen, was es sehr schwer zu lesen macht. aber sonst mag ich sie sehr. lg hayne
| gohan21 chapter 38 . 3/22
story is ok but i think you can do better
| kels chapter 36 . 1/14
Harry and his guilty complex is really annoying...really no matter what was instilled at the Dursleys he should just get a therapy and overcome it
| moosejuice5 chapter 10 . 12/1/2014
So Harry's lusting after a 13 year old, I'm out.
| moosejuice5 chapter 9 . 12/1/2014
So since chapter 7 her age has dropped from 14 to 13, I don't know if this was a mistake or you making harry more of a pervert, becouse he is an actual pervert in this. Have you read Lolita resently or sonthink?
| moosejuice5 chapter 8 . 12/1/2014
Your way of writing speach is incredible annoying, you randomly start new lines and theirs a 50% chance of you adding punctuation when you do. Also for some reason you use colons to start speach? It's irritating to read
| moosejuice5 chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
If I didn't like the first chapter and your style of writing so much the cliches in this chapter would of been enough for me to immediately stop reading - 2nd animagnus - Phoenix animagnus - super wand- ect
| omh666 chapter 38 . 10/24/2014
Unfortunately going to guess that this story is abandon. I enjoyed finding it again, but sort of sucked to find that's still unfinished. Here's hoping you return to writing.
| B. Krystal chapter 1 . 10/11/2014
When I read the summary it sounded like an interesting read, and the first few paragraphs did interest me.
However; I couldn't get past the first chapter, because all the spelling and grammar mistakes were driving me crazy.
Please, either correct the obvious mistakes yourself or find a beta.
| fallenxxshadows chapter 38 . 9/27/2014
Soooooooo bout chapter 39...
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2014
You have some obvious spelling mistakes, such as thought(taught) , Defent(d). And capitalization errors.
| Story-Fixer chapter 38 . 5/23/2014
One of my favorite fanfiction! Will you post a new chapter any time soon?
| MississippiTrojan chapter 38 . 5/1/2014
Please update soon
THIS IS VERY GOOD!