|Reviews for God Forbid|
| otaku4eves chapter 1 . 3/4
im still crying. why! why. ... this is a sad but beautiful story thank you.
| thundermaker101 chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
I really liked this one-sho t, it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Or was that feeling from something i ate? Oh well the world may never know.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2015
nooooo them feels
| Inventor of ZADRF chapter 1 . 12/4/2014
Wow. Thats just it. I mean this is pretty sad but it makes you think: Dib could have just been a schizophrenic the whole time. But your writing is very good. I thought Dib was very in character, and even though Zim was out of character I guess it makes sense in the context of this story. Despite the awful...murder of Zim (I mean holy crap) , I loved this!
| Alison Reilly chapter 1 . 7/11/2014
This made me cry really hard the minute I heard Zim was Dead... it was beautiful.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Holy cow...that was fantastic.
When he said that zim was human I was just like, "omigosh."
Your writting skills are amazing, keep writing fabulously tragic stories. You might just get paid for it one day :)
| London-In-Love chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
NoNoNoNoNo! That was good
| Gingeronomo chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
ASJDSHFKDSFKJSAGKDJG ALLMYFEEELS3 WHY WOULD YOU DO THIS TO MEEEEEEEEEE ITS SO BEAUTIFUL AND SAD AND IM CRYING AND THANK YOU FOR THIS FIC BUT ITS SO FUCKING SAD!
| jade chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
that eas so depresining! it reminded me of shuter island.
| Requiemforapasta chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
| notreadybutwaiting chapter 1 . 6/11/2011
WOAH. That was intense. I loved it! Even though you had me tearing up... DDD:
| xxx0 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Oh...wow. I love this. The ending especially. When you mentioned Zim having all the right organs and not having his squeedily-spooch and so on, I was like "Oh, wonderful, a cliche ending where he's all human and whatnot." But then I thought back to how he was crazy, and I read the rest of the story below that, and I was like, "...wtf. This actually makes sense." Because it does. If Jhonen weren't just a twisted individual with making everyone too stupid to notice Zim was an alien, this is probably what would happen. Dib would be crazy and have these hallucinations and so on. Anyway, what I'm trying to say is that this was epic. Just the right amount of emotion, and I'm a sucker for "wtf" endings. :)
I love this. I shall favorite it. (:
| Nobody McNo-one chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
oh my juice. that made me cry... and i usually never cry. great job... even if it was sad...
| benni chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
| Swing-21 chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
Interesting twist, but some heavy flaws that bring it down. OCCness all around. ZADR is a tricky pairing, you have to make it believable that these two guys love each other even if it's stated in the show that they absolutely hate each other. Gaz would NEVER talk about feelings like this. And Torque, as a bully, would never go through the trouble of breaking, entering and killing both guys. nd if Gaz can stop him, why aren't Zim and Dib able do hold their own, after all these years spent on fighting each other? You need to think your story more throughly before writing it.