|Reviews for Trapped Love|
| oba chapter 17 . 3/4
jUST FINISH IT,i LIKED IT! YOU HAVE TO END THIS STORY,ANYWAYS EVEN IF YOU REWRITE IT,YOUR GONNA NEED AN ENDING ANYWAYS,FINISH IT! FINISH IT! FINISH IT!
| Guest chapter 17 . 4/7/2013
Keep writing! I love it!
| josangely20.1991 chapter 17 . 1/24/2013
i enjoyed it update soon please
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/11/2012
ur not that good at writing lemons, huh?
and it's not grinding, it's thrusting. for tips on writing better lemons, look at moonsaiyanprincess, lavender goddess( i recomend temptation awaits) and go to the gravity room can u take the pressure? site. under fanfics is a story called surviving together. chapterf seven has a really good lemon that u could get some tip from. good luck and keep up the great work! not flaming, giving constructive criticism.
| Okinawa Girl chapter 17 . 11/11/2012
Yes update finish please!
| Okinawa Girl chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Really good I like the ending!
| mitzey chapter 16 . 9/17/2012
love it keep writing
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/11/2011
I love this story. I think it is really good, please finish!
| xFlipJamsx chapter 16 . 11/8/2010
please update soon, add more chapters i would like to know what happens next.
| xFlipJamsx chapter 17 . 8/20/2010
please continue with the story. im interested to know what happens
| sara chapter 17 . 5/16/2010
I think you should keep it the same and finish it. I like it, your really good.
| elenahedgehog chapter 17 . 2/28/2008
please at least tell me how it ends...its killking me not to know
| kim chapter 17 . 11/8/2007
i thought the story was okay. it moved a little fast but it would be nice to read how it ends.
| vmangrl chapter 17 . 7/31/2007
i luv this story i think yiou shouldn't take it off i totally love it so please email me later about it.
| madhatter chapter 3 . 3/6/2007
Alright missy normally I don't waste time reveiwing but I gotta say this is well...crap. It sounds like you got the outline for what you wanted in your mind but you just couldn't write it down right. Also Bulma is crying WAY too much. Bulma is totally stronger than that and why would Vegeta have to pretend that Bulma is his mate if he already broke free and got her. Also if he's not pretending even in this confusion I think Bulma would question or think about it. Also half the stuff that was said would totally never come out of their mouths! I like OOC from time to time but only when it makes you want to laugh or if the writer can back what's happening with facts in the story. This kinda just made me want to vomit! Thanks for trying though I love Bulma and Vegeta together too.