Reviews for Trapped Love
galaxynightsky chapter 17 . 12/26/2016
Super upset i read this whole story to have it be not finished. Was really hoping to find out what happens...
kayamai chapter 16 . 9/1/2016
Update pleasssssseeeeee
vegeta and future trunks chapter 17 . 5/21/2016
I enjoyed this story, loved how vegeta protected bulma from the beginning aww. Yes I agree that this story should be rewritten cuz of all the errors but I would like you to finish the story first cuz I wanna know what happens to bulma and vegeta! So looks likesl bulma's pregnant huh? Lol aww
Plus we gotta redo that lemon lmao XD! Yea we gotta work on that lemon and I'll be willing to help write the lemon too ;) 0lz finish
Guest chapter 17 . 5/29/2015
Please continue! I want to know how it ends!
killer queen sayjin13 chapter 17 . 5/3/2015
I loved this story and on chapter 16 I was so excited when you left it at that cliff hanger and I must complament you on the mature section its was very exciting so please please contine this story and I will definutly keep reading
Xoxo
Guest chapter 17 . 6/7/2014
You should really finish this story I want to know what happens! ) thank you
oba chapter 17 . 3/4/2014
jUST FINISH IT,i LIKED IT! YOU HAVE TO END THIS STORY,ANYWAYS EVEN IF YOU REWRITE IT,YOUR GONNA NEED AN ENDING ANYWAYS,FINISH IT! FINISH IT! FINISH IT!
Guest chapter 17 . 4/7/2013
Keep writing! I love it!
Angelwolf22 chapter 17 . 1/24/2013
i enjoyed it update soon please
Guest chapter 14 . 11/11/2012
ur not that good at writing lemons, huh?
and it's not grinding, it's thrusting. for tips on writing better lemons, look at moonsaiyanprincess, lavender goddess( i recomend temptation awaits) and go to the gravity room can u take the pressure? site. under fanfics is a story called surviving together. chapterf seven has a really good lemon that u could get some tip from. good luck and keep up the great work! not flaming, giving constructive criticism.

saiyangurrll95.
Okinawa Girl chapter 17 . 11/11/2012
Yes update finish please!
Okinawa Girl chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
Really good I like the ending!
mitzey chapter 16 . 9/17/2012
love it keep writing
Guest chapter 17 . 6/11/2011
I love this story. I think it is really good, please finish!
xFlipJamsx chapter 16 . 11/8/2010
please update soon, add more chapters i would like to know what happens next.
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