Reviews for Remember to Breathe
Rinne chapter 1 . 5/23/2005
Nicely written, and glad you didn't kill him off :P
SG15Z chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Wow that's good. Yeah been wondering what happened to you, course ppl might be thinking the same thing about me...Anyways I give this a 9.9/10
Trekkie Lizard chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
*claps* Very good, I really liked it.
deltamom chapter 1 . 7/18/2004
great story please keep writing.
macisgate chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
That was so good! I love your style. Really great job! And I'm glad you didn't kill him off )
Banner chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
I really enjoyed that story.

One request, though - there isn't enough of a break between the last of Daniel's thoughts and the Author's notes. One extra blank line would have indecated a complete separation.
Moon-Raver chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
Daniel, Daniel, Daniel... learn to duck? Ha Ha Ha... Anyways... good job and a bit of a tear jerker... nice job.
BizzyLizzy chapter 1 . 7/17/2004
That was so good, I could really feel what Daniel was going through.