|Reviews for Tanabata Jasmine|
| glassfragrance chapter 28 . 1/25/2012
Absolutely fantastic. The action had me gripping the edge of my seat (err...blanket? since I'm laying in bed) and your characterizations were very fitting; I especially love how you portrayed Kenshin and, of course, Bayushi, who was so subtly changed. And you wrote the subtleties of Kenshin and Kaoru's relationship very spectacularly.
I must admit, I was wary to read this at first, especially because you were a bit dusty in your first chapter (from lack of writing), but you quickly polished up. It was a great pleasure to read this story. Thank you for taking the time and effort to write such a brilliant piece!
| Renaisty chapter 29 . 11/28/2011
Awesome story! And you've got almost no grammatical or spelling mistakes (these are the ones I can spot, these I commend on). Congrats!
| theregoesmysantity.again chapter 29 . 10/17/2011
what a brilliant story! resolved nicely :) well, sort of... that is, nice for the story, but a little harsh on Kenshin, with the amount of injuries the poor guy sustained... poor thing, with all that past behind him guess it's to be expected... and the 'OMAKE OF DOOM!' - i absolutely LOVED it, a fantastic thing to place at the end, as it completely appeals to my sense of humour... haha! :D
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 29 . 9/21/2011
This was a great story. (Seriously)
Love the script summary thingamajigger at the end, too. It perfectly summed up the story. XD (I saw the Caribbean thing you put at the end of one of the chapters - I think I favourited the story that mentioned that...)
| Kamui-Lyn chapter 27 . 6/6/2011
I love this story! Great plot. One thing though. If this takes place between the Kyoto and Jinchuu Arcs then why did it mention the time when Tsubame went to Rakuninmura in the Jinchuu Arc? It was mentioned in the story when it says she followed Yahiko to see what was wrong.
Anyway, this is a really good story. Found it on MeijiTales first but couldn't review on the ipod there. I'll go check out your other stories.
| of untold secrets chapter 29 . 11/12/2010
-is sad that story is ending-
This is, quite possibly, my most favourite RK fanfic. Ever. Awesomely well written, well thought out, descriptive, and just plain great. (Bet you haven't heard THAT before) Definitely favourited.
| InkDreams chapter 2 . 5/27/2010
What a great start. Kenshin's character has been done wonderfully and the atmosphere of the fic reminds of me of canonRK. I'm very interested in seeing how this is all going to play out.
| sirensbane chapter 25 . 5/24/2010
He's injured, just escaped from captivity, is feverish, has fought several battles, and is about to faint, and what he says is "Please don't worry, Kaoru-dono...I'm just tired." LOL. That is Kenshin in a nutshell. Great job keeping everyone in character.
| sirensbane chapter 6 . 5/23/2010
Kenshin is almost unconscious, poisoned and blind, and he still kicks butt. Need I go on?
| sirensbane chapter 5 . 5/23/2010
Dang...with so many reviews you hardly need mine. But this is so well-written I felt I had to comment. As usual with long stories, I'm having troubles thinking of specifics, but this is just so generally good. I love how Kenshin lures them close and then proceeds to kick large amounts of butt. Everyone's in character, which is beautiful. Okay, I'm babbling now, but you deserve this many reviews.
| kokoronagomu chapter 29 . 3/11/2010
a dramatic and captivating masterpiece of intrigue, suspense that have enjoyed and will continue to enjoy every time i read it in future.
i so love your 'rk' work and will be forever resisting the urge to do the whole annoying: "UPDATE! MOER! UPDATE!" 'fangirl squee' reviews.
| Cookie Master's Apprentice chapter 27 . 3/10/2010
Well, make this the 900th review.
About the story, it is truly a work of art. I am completely amazed with your skill from beginning to end. It's great to know that prodigies are still out there, and they are still writing.
| sarahlilly95 chapter 29 . 1/4/2010
Loved it! Can't wait to go reread...
| calliopechild chapter 29 . 12/30/2009
Loved this! I was trolling around your stories and stumbled across this one, which has inspired me to pick back up on exploring RK (an attempt which tapered off a while ago, I can't really remember why). This was a really awesome story, and so well-written, per your usual work. I loved the plotline; involved but believable, and not insanely convoluted. And your characters and characterizations were lovely! Senzo is a douchebag (pardon my French) and you did a lovely job of making him a genuine slimeball.
And just all together...this was a lovely story. I came here after reading Snowblind and was looking for more RK fics by you, and I'm glad I found it. I'm also going to take this chance to make a shameless plea for you to continue working on Snowblind; I'm really interested to see the end of that one, though I know how life gets in the way sometimes. So I'll only beg a little (PLEASE?) and wish you the best of luck and happy writing. _
| older and amused chapter 29 . 10/9/2009
"Senzo: EEK! Curse Yamato’s sudden yet inevitable betrayal!" -i LOVE you! i almost fell out of my chair when you referenced Firefly, i was just THAT awesomed out!
fantastic fic, and the omake was HILARIOUS! meh. all i have to say at the moment. i'd better go and actually study now, like i was supposed to be doing for the past hour and a half. pesk fanfic authoress! -glares-